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Array ( [sid] => 145577 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => unforgetable times [time] => 2008-10-07 08:07:12 [hometext] => childhood memories [bodytext] => unforgetable times is the name of this ryhme.
the day the sun shined and saved my life,
was only a child of 15 when she gave me the news
"wat do you mean,wat am i gonna do"
im to young for this,not gonna have a clue
what will do
unforgetable times.

days pass so slow as i think and drink.
so confussed,minds racing in a million different places,
cant see straight just a bunch of blurry faces,
pass me by as i collapse on the ground,
i stare to the sky,the sun shines
unforgetable times.

still shocked wondering why im here,
then all of a sudden like a BANG my head starts to clear.
lookin at the clouds and birds go bye,
i overcome this fear,dry my eye and change my mind,
no need to hide
its life it goes from bad to good in a matther of time,
stop stressing and be happy its so much better,
its a blessing
unforgetable times.

the next few months pass so fast,
its all a bit mad
by the time im 16 im already a dad,
my gorgeous son brought into this world
took one look at his face and it all made sense,
life,love the world made sense.
now when the sun shines my son shines,i smile
and remeber the day that saved my life,
unforgetable times.

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unforgetable times

Contributed by snoopington on Tuesday, 7th October 2008 @ 08:07:12 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



unforgetable times is the name of this ryhme.
the day the sun shined and saved my life,
was only a child of 15 when she gave me the news
"wat do you mean,wat am i gonna do"
im to young for this,not gonna have a clue
what will do
unforgetable times.

days pass so slow as i think and drink.
so confussed,minds racing in a million different places,
cant see straight just a bunch of blurry faces,
pass me by as i collapse on the ground,
i stare to the sky,the sun shines
unforgetable times.

still shocked wondering why im here,
then all of a sudden like a BANG my head starts to clear.
lookin at the clouds and birds go bye,
i overcome this fear,dry my eye and change my mind,
no need to hide
its life it goes from bad to good in a matther of time,
stop stressing and be happy its so much better,
its a blessing
unforgetable times.

the next few months pass so fast,
its all a bit mad
by the time im 16 im already a dad,
my gorgeous son brought into this world
took one look at his face and it all made sense,
life,love the world made sense.
now when the sun shines my son shines,i smile
and remeber the day that saved my life,
unforgetable times.





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Re: unforgetable times (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Wednesday, 8th October 2008 @ 12:47:30 AM AEST
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quite a thing for a sixteen year old to handle...more power to you...
great write
kara


Re: unforgetable times (User Rating: 1 )
by Ambivalence on Wednesday, 8th October 2008 @ 08:37:22 PM AEST
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i'm glad ur taking full responsibility as a young father b/c theres many cowards out there who impregnate their women and just walk away.
i hope u will always be there for ur son and provide him good unforgettable times. great job, take care
-K.Z.


Re: unforgetable times (User Rating: 1 )
by kelleigh on Monday, 13th October 2008 @ 01:37:16 PM AEST
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hey!!!! wow know i read the original but its still amazing!!! well done see ya soon :)


Re: unforgetable times (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 2nd December 2008 @ 01:49:01 PM AEST
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a poem showing great maturity, both moral and poetic. credit to you.


Re: unforgetable times (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Sunday, 18th April 2010 @ 11:14:19 PM AEST
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what a wonderful journey of acceptance of what life has not only give you but blessed you with written straight from the heart




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