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Array ( [sid] => 145788 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => conversation lost [time] => 2008-10-19 17:38:10 [hometext] => [bodytext] => we are all in are owN world to some degree

sometimes your wOrld can be torn apart

people come and go leaving my mind a mess.

peoples thoughts and prOblems breakdown the walls

that hold up my own. wheN i loose a thought where does

it go? is it subconciously swEpt under a rug when left to clean

up my thoughts and sort oUt my problems? it may be hard

to keep together but it caNt be torn apart because its only

made whole when my worlD is shared with somebody else

true peace comes in thE midst of chaos. i talk to

the best of my ability when youR words attack my thoughts, my

attention is paid at itS high cost, i try to find

the things to say in The cluddered closet

of my mind becAuse we all wear

are words if we doNt lie about are lives

your world is baseD on you so it is so

easily shattered by otherS that is why we feel alone
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 21 [informant] => shizzle [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

conversation lost

Contributed by shizzle on Sunday, 19th October 2008 @ 05:38:10 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

we are all in are owN world to some degree

sometimes your wOrld can be torn apart

people come and go leaving my mind a mess.

peoples thoughts and prOblems breakdown the walls

that hold up my own. wheN i loose a thought where does

it go? is it subconciously swEpt under a rug when left to clean

up my thoughts and sort oUt my problems? it may be hard

to keep together but it caNt be torn apart because its only

made whole when my worlD is shared with somebody else

true peace comes in thE midst of chaos. i talk to

the best of my ability when youR words attack my thoughts, my

attention is paid at itS high cost, i try to find

the things to say in The cluddered closet

of my mind becAuse we all wear

are words if we doNt lie about are lives

your world is baseD on you so it is so

easily shattered by otherS that is why we feel alone

Copyright © shizzle ... [ 2008-10-19 17:38:10]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: conversation lost (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Sunday, 19th October 2008 @ 05:49:39 PM AEST
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wow! great write! you put so much into this. i look forward to more posts from you!
thank you
kara

Re: conversation lost (User Rating: 1 )
by Ambivalence on Monday, 20th October 2008 @ 01:05:28 AM AEST
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nice write. i noticed ur message in the middle "no one understands" and i'm pretty sure ur not alone concerning these emotions. take care
-K.Z.

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