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All we know is violence.
Its as plain as the grim look of a soliders face as red hot metal makes its home in his chest.
The saddness that strikes his daughter when she finds out her father wont walk her down the isle.
Or the happiness of the man who delivered the solider to deaths door step.
We, as a whole, have the beings known as Hate, Evil, and Deprivetion circling us as if we are their prey.
But then we feel a slight tickle on our cheek.
And slowly it engulfs us as our hair dances out from behind our ear and we begin to know serenity.
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I dont have a title but maybe someone can help me with that. : )

Contributed by HanaBoo on Monday, 20th October 2008 @ 04:40:21 AM in AEST
Topic: war

Our world is in a stand still of hate.
All we know is violence.
Its as plain as the grim look of a soliders face as red hot metal makes its home in his chest.
The saddness that strikes his daughter when she finds out her father wont walk her down the isle.
Or the happiness of the man who delivered the solider to deaths door step.
We, as a whole, have the beings known as Hate, Evil, and Deprivetion circling us as if we are their prey.
But then we feel a slight tickle on our cheek.
And slowly it engulfs us as our hair dances out from behind our ear and we begin to know serenity.
Mother Nature kisses us and reminds us of our old friend, Love.

Copyright © HanaBoo ... [ 2008-10-20 04:40:21]
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Re: I dont have a title but maybe someone can help me with that. : ) (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Monday, 20th October 2008 @ 05:15:50 AM AEST
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Firstly--welcome to YPDC! Hope you enjoy it here
Strong write. Don't know of a title for it, but we have untitled works here too! Best of luck to you...
Smiles
Kara

Re: I dont have a title but maybe someone can help me with that. : ) (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 20th October 2008 @ 08:39:33 AM AEST
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Hana boo,
I love that name by the way. Welcome to ypdc.
You captured the truth and feeling with this write.
It is powerful with sad undertones.
It can stand without a title
or one that came to mind What about love??

It is a great write.

Have a terrific and beautiful fall day

Hugs
Michelle

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