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Array ( [sid] => 145802 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Poison [time] => 2008-10-20 11:33:25 [hometext] => My therapist told me to write instead of drinking. I tried it but ended up drinking when I was done writing this. It was a good try though. [bodytext] => At sip number one, you had me.
I became your slave
and I can’t be torn away.
Only way I will leave you baby,
is by walking away by myself.

You’re my sweet yet bitter poison.
You put a smile on my face
and make my world spin at a safer pace.
When you’re in my arms I have an excuse.
I did it because you made me, I had no other choice.

You are my safety net
and a perfect bet
that I’ll be at peace tonight.
One more baby and I’ll be fine,
but one turns to two
and then more
and finally I hit the floor.
I wanted to be here all night.

You’re my sweet yet bitter poison.
I’m glad I found you
and I’m never gonna leave you!
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Poison

Contributed by justme03 on Monday, 20th October 2008 @ 11:33:25 AM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

At sip number one, you had me.
I became your slave
and I can’t be torn away.
Only way I will leave you baby,
is by walking away by myself.

You’re my sweet yet bitter poison.
You put a smile on my face
and make my world spin at a safer pace.
When you’re in my arms I have an excuse.
I did it because you made me, I had no other choice.

You are my safety net
and a perfect bet
that I’ll be at peace tonight.
One more baby and I’ll be fine,
but one turns to two
and then more
and finally I hit the floor.
I wanted to be here all night.

You’re my sweet yet bitter poison.
I’m glad I found you
and I’m never gonna leave you!

Copyright Â© justme03 ... [ 2008-10-20 11:33:25]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Poison (User Rating: 1 )
by outlawpoet on Monday, 20th October 2008 @ 02:33:31 PM AEST
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good write.. not sure how theraputic it was for you but good write i enjoyed it

Re: Poison (User Rating: 1 )
by Voice of the Silent on Monday, 20th October 2008 @ 05:05:43 PM AEST
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good write i liked it

As for drinking problems I go to a bar everyday but don't drink but i've seen plenty of people who do and have a problem
my advice to you is get some good friends to help you quit or at least cut down on the drinking

Re: Poison (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 21st October 2008 @ 01:43:13 AM AEST
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I'd say you got this one right on the money.
I especially like the title cause that tells it like it is.
Hang tuff friend.
Huggs, prayer, blessings,
emy

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