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It would be an injustice to even try,
But I see the good in you when others criticise.
I see you trying to make a difference
I see the honourable man
Who would not deceive or cheat just because he can.
I see the look in our girls eyes
When you walk in the door
With a kiss and a cuddle and nothing more.
I see the look in their in eyes
When they tell their day to your appropriate sighs.
I see the pleasure you get from a good book
I feel the pleasure when I'm with you and catch your fleeting look
Seventeen years of devotion you have given to me
A feeling of such contentment and security.
So thank you my love and continue to be
All you have ever been. [comments] => 8 [counter] => 247 [topic] => 2 [informant] => lilymaemax [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 19 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
What I see...

Contributed by lilymaemax on Sunday, 26th October 2008 @ 06:01:12 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



My love for you cannot be described
It would be an injustice to even try,
But I see the good in you when others criticise.
I see you trying to make a difference
I see the honourable man
Who would not deceive or cheat just because he can.
I see the look in our girls eyes
When you walk in the door
With a kiss and a cuddle and nothing more.
I see the look in their in eyes
When they tell their day to your appropriate sighs.
I see the pleasure you get from a good book
I feel the pleasure when I'm with you and catch your fleeting look
Seventeen years of devotion you have given to me
A feeling of such contentment and security.
So thank you my love and continue to be
All you have ever been.




Copyright © lilymaemax ... [ 2008-10-26 18:01:12]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: What I see... (User Rating: 1 )
by navydocny on Sunday, 26th October 2008 @ 06:59:25 PM AEST
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Very beautiful and heartfelt....
To love and be loved so is such a treasure...
You've captured something very deep...
Love and gratitude are hard to describe and you've done it oh so very well....
Brilliant!
Steve


Re: What I see... (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 26th October 2008 @ 09:25:51 PM AEST
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Congratulations!! After seventeen yaers it's great to see a tribute like this to your love....
Jenni


Re: What I see... (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 26th October 2008 @ 11:03:39 PM AEST
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Bless you dear lily,
I am so happy you have this love in your life.
Thanks for sharing it with us. Many more blessing and love to you sweet lady.

Hugs
Michelle


Re: What I see... (User Rating: 1 )
by ki on Sunday, 26th October 2008 @ 11:31:08 PM AEST
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how sweet!! may u continue to have such a beautiful love!!


Re: What I see... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 08:54:16 PM AEST
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Sounds like you are two very lucky people
to have such a wonderful love.
Great write.........Mike


Re: What I see... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 28th October 2008 @ 04:23:47 AM AEST
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Loves poems are my favorite to read. I just love seeing the love in someone's heart and their sharing with the rest of us. Thank you very much for an enjoyable read and I am soooo glad to see another successful marriage!!!


Re: What I see... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 2nd December 2008 @ 01:30:06 PM AEST
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a happy poem, it made me smile. i hope the love lasts even longer than eternity.


Re: What I see... (User Rating: 1 )
by windowguy on Saturday, 16th May 2009 @ 10:03:24 AM AEST
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Praiseworthy write for someone special.
A heartwarming poem.Cheers. :-)




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