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Array ( [sid] => 145947 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => set me free [time] => 2008-10-27 19:05:59 [hometext] => just a poem no authors notes really except for READ THIS and let me know whats good and bad about it or if you can relate [bodytext] => you hold me hostage inside your walls
like wild horses in stalls
you hold me back but never down
you can't make my heart wear a frown
so take these chains from my heart and let me be
take the shackles from my feet and set me free

in the end we all know god judges all
and in the end i know my name he will call
so today go ahead and hold me inside your walls
but im gone the day that my freedom calls
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set me free

Contributed by outlawpoet on Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 07:05:59 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

you hold me hostage inside your walls
like wild horses in stalls
you hold me back but never down
you can't make my heart wear a frown
so take these chains from my heart and let me be
take the shackles from my feet and set me free

in the end we all know god judges all
and in the end i know my name he will call
so today go ahead and hold me inside your walls
but im gone the day that my freedom calls

Copyright © outlawpoet ... [ 2008-10-27 19:05:59]
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Re: set me free (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 07:33:01 PM AEST
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You know I can hear music to these words??

Yes I relate to this as well....... We seem to have to many judges in this world don't we?

I wont let anyone confine me any longer.......

Freedom be yours my friend in every single moment.

Hugs
Michelle

Re: set me free (User Rating: 1 )
by rebelwcause on Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 07:41:36 PM AEST
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awsome write brother

Re: set me free (User Rating: 1 )
by catz77 on Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 07:43:23 PM AEST
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Great poem. ^_^

Re: set me free (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 07:55:58 PM AEST
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good write

Shari

Re: set me free (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 10:00:02 PM AEST
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so much conviction and emotion here.
i definitely relate, as you know.
thank you
love smiles blessings
kara

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