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Bent hips. Cracked lips. She's a regular Marilyn Monroe.
She'd kiss you, if you'd let her.
She can't exist anymore'. Ignore her.
Today, it's just the way the medication makes her.
If she dares tell you she's bipolar
Just laugh politely. Agree.
She'll kick you straight in the stomach.
Searching for her youth. She'll tell you anything but the truth.
Your heart is a joke to her.
It's only an organ' she'll whisper.

But for some reason I cant take my eyes off her
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Your Insanity Turns Me On

Contributed by amber_vonHorror on Thursday, 13th November 2008 @ 07:38:43 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Can you count the times, she runs her tongue over her teeth
Bent hips. Cracked lips. She's a regular Marilyn Monroe.
She'd kiss you, if you'd let her.
She can't exist anymore'. Ignore her.
Today, it's just the way the medication makes her.
If she dares tell you she's bipolar
Just laugh politely. Agree.
She'll kick you straight in the stomach.
Searching for her youth. She'll tell you anything but the truth.
Your heart is a joke to her.
It's only an organ' she'll whisper.

But for some reason I cant take my eyes off her
Something about insane girls makes my blood run warmer.

Copyright © amber_vonHorror ... [ 2008-11-13 19:38:43]
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Re: Your Insanity Turns Me On (User Rating: 1 )
by jesusofholland on Thursday, 13th November 2008 @ 10:50:22 PM AEST
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Nice write. I also find myself attracted to the crazy, bipolar girls. I'm drawn to them like a moth to flame...I know it's only going to hurt, but I can't stop myself. Nice write, and so true.

Re: Your Insanity Turns Me On (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 14th November 2008 @ 11:14:54 AM AEST
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I hate when girls make a point of telling you they're ''insane''.
I immediately begin to find them ugly... to the point that I just loathe them... it's just the in-sincerity, I can't bare it.
Now girls that are insane but aren't aware of it...
I very much enjoy them.

Great poem, I really loved reading this.

Re: Your Insanity Turns Me On (User Rating: 1 )
by fanniesson on Tuesday, 27th January 2009 @ 08:59:48 PM AEST
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killler piece
from Beginning too end
though i loved the last stanza the best

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