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For everything we see
Is now a memory
Of all that used to be.

Let the rain come down in our eyes-
For everything we love
Is like a little dove
Flying too far above.

Let the rain come down in our eyes-
For everything we built
Is reduced to guilt
As it's covered in filth.

Let the rain come down in our eyes-
And wash it all away
So that maybe one day
Our children can all play. [comments] => 11 [counter] => 305 [topic] => 21 [informant] => karoody [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Rain

Contributed by karoody on Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 11:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Let the rain come down in our eyes-
For everything we see
Is now a memory
Of all that used to be.

Let the rain come down in our eyes-
For everything we love
Is like a little dove
Flying too far above.

Let the rain come down in our eyes-
For everything we built
Is reduced to guilt
As it's covered in filth.

Let the rain come down in our eyes-
And wash it all away
So that maybe one day
Our children can all play.

Copyright Â© karoody ... [ 2003-03-20 23:45:00]
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Re: Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 11:59:11 PM AEST
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This is sad.... but very beautiful...

I especially love the ending... look to the brighter side.... but this is a really really beautiful poem...

YS

Re: Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 12:56:03 AM AEST
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you Girl, why don't you turn into water and flow away along with rain water, ha, there is some thought flow in this poem. good read. venkat

Re: Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 03:32:32 AM AEST
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encouraging and precious write... yes, let us wash the filth away, so our children can play another day... blessings...

Re: Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 03:59:31 AM AEST
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Something really warming about this poem. Saying that life can be hard but we are optimistic that we can make it better. Really lovely poem.

sleepless_siren

Re: Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 12:00:10 PM AEST
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The rain becomes a baptism of such.
Beatifully expressed!!!
Angel always....Godspeed!!! 0:-)

Re: Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 12:29:02 PM AEST
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I love this poem!! Living in the desert the patter of rain is a treat too me. Yes rain as tears are cleansing. Let the rain come!! Such a ray of hope with this poem. Nice!!
Michelle

Re: Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 03:47:38 PM AEST
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there is a beautiful love in this poem, and a beautiful hope, may your beauty shine on

Re: Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 04:54:34 PM AEST
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Simple beautiful thoght ,sweetly and innocently expressed. Qute a sting in the tail though. Good poem.

Re: Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by kolbrun on Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 05:57:54 AM AEST
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This poem is very well written and very passionate I really love it! well take care and much love to ya

yours Kolbrún

Re: Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 10:18:37 PM AEST
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wow ... its so amazing the other day i was tryin to write something just like this... i just couldn't get this down on paper though... nicely done kara maybe my writers block was because something in me wanted you to write my thoughts down... wierd huh

Re: Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by wazarov on Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 10:46:05 PM AEST
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honestly and truely i was shocked by the way this poem was composed, it is my duty as a reader to bow to your talent.. highly beautiful

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