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The past follows me
Won’t let me sleep
Dwells inside me
A shallow pyramid
Of guilt and shame
Nowhere to hide
No one accepts the blame
Bruises and scars
On every part of my soul
Secrets I carry so heavy
Never to be told
Levels of loneliness
Degrees of separation
This entire experience
A pure aggravation
That walks everywhere with me
Makes it harder to breathe
Strips me of intensity
Extinguishes my needs.
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Alone

Contributed by juliette on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 04:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Peace escapes me
The past follows me
Won’t let me sleep
Dwells inside me
A shallow pyramid
Of guilt and shame
Nowhere to hide
No one accepts the blame
Bruises and scars
On every part of my soul
Secrets I carry so heavy
Never to be told
Levels of loneliness
Degrees of separation
This entire experience
A pure aggravation
That walks everywhere with me
Makes it harder to breathe
Strips me of intensity
Extinguishes my needs.

Copyright Â© juliette ... [ 2003-03-21 04:05:00]
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Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 05:11:45 AM AEST
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i send you my blessings... i am sorry for the tragedies that plague your life... beautifully sad poem...

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 10:22:18 AM AEST
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Such a beautiful poem. I can feel the sadness expressed when I read it and it speaks straight to the heart. Well done!!

sleepless_siren

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 12:15:40 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem. I know what your going thru. You are never alone even though it may feel that way.
Love will happen and you will be happy. You may never erase the past but it will fade into memory and not hurt so badly all of the time.
Hugs and much love.
Your friend
Michelle

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 02:21:42 PM AEST
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very moving, beautiful
Sharon

Re: Alone (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 11:27:47 PM AEST
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your poem is very touching.i too have sad past,but your work is just the begain.you must be comming to the point of allowing others to hear your pain bacause you put it out there for the world to see.when you allow yourself to recieve help from others you will feel so much better about yourself u can try to do it alone-if u won't let anyone help u then u are alone.you can turn anything around-and help others with your willness to talk.let people in.you'll see i did and i am not alone anymore.good luck! always green

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by cryingonmyporch on Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 10:52:38 PM AEST
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Very very nice. I have felt somewhat like this at times or thought like this however it should be said.
Always
Amy

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 09:58:32 PM AEST
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Great words here:

"A shallow pyramid
Of guilt and shame
Nowhere to hide
No one accepts the blame "

last few lines as well..
great stroke of the pen.

A nobel write as you bare all.

Billy

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