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But I'd give it all to take away your flaws
The motor on your mouth seems to never pause
What you do and the things you say
Just always seem to get in the way
My hatred for you grew a mile today
If I could ever find a knife
I'd break it in half and stab you twice
Because without you there's no interference in my life
Give me some space so I can lose some time
If I have to see you again I'll lose my mind
I'm probably losing because I'm always behind
So go away, before I make you gone for good
You never listened and you never understood
The way I feel about you, I never could
Tell you to your face because you never open an ear
But hopefully you'll be gone, come this time next year
And to be honest I won't even shed a tear [comments] => 7 [counter] => 247 [topic] => 48 [informant] => ChristopherFriedrich [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Six Feet Deep(Go To Hell)

Contributed by ChristopherFriedrich on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 06:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I wouldn't give a quarter to help your cause
But I'd give it all to take away your flaws
The motor on your mouth seems to never pause
What you do and the things you say
Just always seem to get in the way
My hatred for you grew a mile today
If I could ever find a knife
I'd break it in half and stab you twice
Because without you there's no interference in my life
Give me some space so I can lose some time
If I have to see you again I'll lose my mind
I'm probably losing because I'm always behind
So go away, before I make you gone for good
You never listened and you never understood
The way I feel about you, I never could
Tell you to your face because you never open an ear
But hopefully you'll be gone, come this time next year
And to be honest I won't even shed a tear

Copyright © ChristopherFriedrich ... [ 2003-03-21 06:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Six Feet Deep(Go To Hell) (User Rating: 1 )
by lostforgood on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 10:49:44 AM AEST
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wow, i dont know what to say about this, it's very deep and moving, the resentment portrayed in this poem is so strong, it is well written but i must say that i hope you don't really feel this way
~lost~

Re: Six Feet Deep(Go To Hell) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 10:52:30 AM AEST
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Really powerful. Hatred can be even stronger than love. Try to get to the place where you don't even care about them enough to hate them. Rally deep poem.

sleepless_siren

Re: Six Feet Deep(Go To Hell) (User Rating: 1 )
by avemaria on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 10:52:49 AM AEST
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WOW!!! Someone has anger issues! (JK)
I liked this poem alot. It was nice to read something different.
maria

Re: Six Feet Deep(Go To Hell) (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 11:26:39 AM AEST
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Intense!! You wrote this well. I will tell you this person who has you so angry, not worth the effort of your feelings. I know how hard it is believe me.
I'm wishing you peace and happiness without this person around. When they put you into a state of hate its time for them too go.Best wishes too you!!
Your frined Michelle

Re: Six Feet Deep(Go To Hell) (User Rating: 1 )
by springchic1979 on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 01:52:34 PM AEST
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Now that's telling it like you feel! It was a very forthright and intense poem. Great job!

Yvonne

Re: Six Feet Deep(Go To Hell) (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 06:49:40 AM AEST
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excellent, another awesome honest expression

Re: Six Feet Deep(Go To Hell) (User Rating: 1 )
by Jacquelynne on Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 12:24:53 AM AEST
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hey, this is good, it feels like you took all my emotions about my step father and put them into a poem. excellent excellent write.

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