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Array ( [sid] => 146726 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Sweet Escape [time] => 2008-12-09 00:08:22 [hometext] => A letter/poem to Leo...my angel [bodytext] => We met under circumstances unexpected
And what happened was the last thing we expected
Though those around seemed to
You were hers
My friends love
I watched in silence as she distanced herself
And you tried to figure her out
We grew closer
Playing around, wrestling
I remember pinning you and looking in your eyes
Our playful smiles slid off our lips gently
And I felt a deep longing to kiss you and thought you felt the same
I managed not to give in, after all I'm always wrong
And you were hers
But later we were at a party
And you were upset
She was upset
Throwing you both in the room and shutting the door
I forced you to resolve the problems
And I felt better knowing you both felt better
I don't know what was said, what was done
But you were more at ease
And she was calmer
We left the party together
You, in hopes at beating me in a wrestling rematch
Me, knowing you never would
We found ourselves in that same position
You pinned down with me on top, smirking
And the feeling arose again burning deep in my stomach
The smiles were gone and the world too
And a wave of shock overtook me as you leaned your head up
And captured my lips with your own
Neither of us were prepared for it
The feelings that bombarded us
I remember what you said, looking in my eyes deep
Breathless
"Is it just me or did that...feel right...?"
It really did
Before I knew it we were together
Holding hands we went to Mamma's
And told her we were together
She didn't seem surprised at all, even said she expected it
Even though she assumed I was your brother's
I wonder to this day what it was you had mumbled in your sleep
That morning that caused Mamma to believe we'd fall for eachother
Either way I don't care
I'm moving in to our apartment
We're going to live together
Be together
I love you
My mind's at ease
My heart's settled at last
Those feelings for my once love that I would get
Whenever I saw him, even when I was with another
Are finally gone
Moving in with you will be a great decision
You're giving me an escape
From my mother, from the strain and stress she creates
From the verbal abuse, neglect, and constant heartache
And depression she provokes
My angel, my lover, my sweet escape
I love you Leo
My soul-mate [comments] => 1 [counter] => 148 [topic] => 2 [informant] => desolantdreamer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
My Sweet Escape

Contributed by desolantdreamer on Tuesday, 9th December 2008 @ 12:08:22 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



We met under circumstances unexpected
And what happened was the last thing we expected
Though those around seemed to
You were hers
My friends love
I watched in silence as she distanced herself
And you tried to figure her out
We grew closer
Playing around, wrestling
I remember pinning you and looking in your eyes
Our playful smiles slid off our lips gently
And I felt a deep longing to kiss you and thought you felt the same
I managed not to give in, after all I'm always wrong
And you were hers
But later we were at a party
And you were upset
She was upset
Throwing you both in the room and shutting the door
I forced you to resolve the problems
And I felt better knowing you both felt better
I don't know what was said, what was done
But you were more at ease
And she was calmer
We left the party together
You, in hopes at beating me in a wrestling rematch
Me, knowing you never would
We found ourselves in that same position
You pinned down with me on top, smirking
And the feeling arose again burning deep in my stomach
The smiles were gone and the world too
And a wave of shock overtook me as you leaned your head up
And captured my lips with your own
Neither of us were prepared for it
The feelings that bombarded us
I remember what you said, looking in my eyes deep
Breathless
"Is it just me or did that...feel right...?"
It really did
Before I knew it we were together
Holding hands we went to Mamma's
And told her we were together
She didn't seem surprised at all, even said she expected it
Even though she assumed I was your brother's
I wonder to this day what it was you had mumbled in your sleep
That morning that caused Mamma to believe we'd fall for eachother
Either way I don't care
I'm moving in to our apartment
We're going to live together
Be together
I love you
My mind's at ease
My heart's settled at last
Those feelings for my once love that I would get
Whenever I saw him, even when I was with another
Are finally gone
Moving in with you will be a great decision
You're giving me an escape
From my mother, from the strain and stress she creates
From the verbal abuse, neglect, and constant heartache
And depression she provokes
My angel, my lover, my sweet escape
I love you Leo
My soul-mate




Copyright © desolantdreamer ... [ 2008-12-09 00:08:22]
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Re: My Sweet Escape (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 10th December 2008 @ 02:13:55 AM AEST
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This is a bit sad but devinely beautifull and sweet.
Incredile writing as always.
blessings, huggs, joy, peace,
emy




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