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Array ( [sid] => 146729 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ** A Sigh ** [time] => 2008-12-09 05:59:33 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Staring at the floor
Thinking about everything
Looking at the door
Waiting for anything, waiting for nothing

Finally I realized all I lived for was a myth
How much it is hard to say goodbye
I breathe in deep as if it is my last breath
& then my whole being releases a sigh

But this sigh was like no other
Like it would never end
but at last it ended with a shiver
& then I fainted & in deep sleep I descend

After I don't know how much time I woke up
An overwhelming feeling of loneliness took over me
Feeling so cold, so tired. My limbs were numb
Getting up , I glanced a body beside me

I turned my head
My eyes turned red
Could she really be dead???!!

My eyes became wide open
& my heartbeats raced the wind
She was all alone on the floor lying
I prayed the dream would end

All around me nothing but darkness
Lying on snow , she was so cold
& my sanity wanna escape this
I must be dreaming, oh please my lord

I shook her so hard trying to wake her up
Screaming at her , " please get up"
No sound, no movement, no heartbeats
Even her breathing had stopped

& suddenly from the curves of the dark
Some voices arrived
Came to take her away , hiding their smirks
I yelled at them " I'm not dead"

Why can't they see me , why can't they hear me??
So great my pain , why can't they feel it??

I can see, I can hear , I can speak
I still feel, all the past I still remember
I'm not dead, I'm just pain sick
This didn't happen , it's just panic

They dragged her away, I ran after them
But they faded to black & I lost them

I stopped running & dropped to my knees
I knew my ending was close but not this near
I ended up in the dark, cold & alone as I expected
So it is for real , my darkest fear

So finally, the pain is the winner
So finally my wounds killed me & my sorrow won
As always I'm the loser
& all I escaped is now done

Again, I stared at the floor
Laughing hysterically, my heart wad so sore
The pain wad unbearable , unstoppable
& I fainted again but this time forever [comments] => 2 [counter] => 148 [topic] => 13 [informant] => dark_angel111 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
** A Sigh **

Contributed by dark_angel111 on Tuesday, 9th December 2008 @ 05:59:33 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Staring at the floor
Thinking about everything
Looking at the door
Waiting for anything, waiting for nothing

Finally I realized all I lived for was a myth
How much it is hard to say goodbye
I breathe in deep as if it is my last breath
& then my whole being releases a sigh

But this sigh was like no other
Like it would never end
but at last it ended with a shiver
& then I fainted & in deep sleep I descend

After I don't know how much time I woke up
An overwhelming feeling of loneliness took over me
Feeling so cold, so tired. My limbs were numb
Getting up , I glanced a body beside me

I turned my head
My eyes turned red
Could she really be dead???!!

My eyes became wide open
& my heartbeats raced the wind
She was all alone on the floor lying
I prayed the dream would end

All around me nothing but darkness
Lying on snow , she was so cold
& my sanity wanna escape this
I must be dreaming, oh please my lord

I shook her so hard trying to wake her up
Screaming at her , " please get up"
No sound, no movement, no heartbeats
Even her breathing had stopped

& suddenly from the curves of the dark
Some voices arrived
Came to take her away , hiding their smirks
I yelled at them " I'm not dead"

Why can't they see me , why can't they hear me??
So great my pain , why can't they feel it??

I can see, I can hear , I can speak
I still feel, all the past I still remember
I'm not dead, I'm just pain sick
This didn't happen , it's just panic

They dragged her away, I ran after them
But they faded to black & I lost them

I stopped running & dropped to my knees
I knew my ending was close but not this near
I ended up in the dark, cold & alone as I expected
So it is for real , my darkest fear

So finally, the pain is the winner
So finally my wounds killed me & my sorrow won
As always I'm the loser
& all I escaped is now done

Again, I stared at the floor
Laughing hysterically, my heart wad so sore
The pain wad unbearable , unstoppable
& I fainted again but this time forever




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Re: ** A Sigh ** (User Rating: 1 )
by Voice of the Silent on Tuesday, 9th December 2008 @ 04:18:20 PM AEST
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Very deep very dark and very good
I know the feeling of loneliness and that no one is listening. it's a sad thought to be alone for ever or just not to be heard when you speak. But no one is alone and there's always someone who will listen
hope this helps
keep writing
-kelly


Re: ** A Sigh ** (User Rating: 1 )
by dark_angel111 on Wednesday, 10th December 2008 @ 03:01:31 AM AEST
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thank u (kellybrent15) for ur nice comment
may be i don't fear being alone as much as i fear people hurting me so that's why i 'd rather be alone sometimes. i don't know




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