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Array ( [sid] => 146763 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dog [time] => 2008-12-11 01:33:00 [hometext] => i randomly wrote this one day when i was bored [bodytext] => As sunlight leaps through open windows
And Dust glitters, sparkles

His moist nose twitches

As flowers greet the dawn and spread their wings
Flying, but never leaving the ground

One sleep encrusted eye opens

As mail is delivered from a blue-suited gent
Newspaper flopped onto stained wood

The beast is awakened
And sneaks up to his prey
He waits then POUNCES

As paper rain drenches down in torrents,
Flooding the lawn

He exuberates joy
Then RETREATS
Into the sanctity of His den

While the remains of his prey coat
the ground in a blanket of articles and advertisements

[comments] => 5 [counter] => 282 [topic] => 29 [informant] => Yovi [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => PetPoems )

Dog

Contributed by Yovi on Thursday, 11th December 2008 @ 01:33:00 AM in AEST
Topic: PetPoems

As sunlight leaps through open windows
And Dust glitters, sparkles

His moist nose twitches

As flowers greet the dawn and spread their wings
Flying, but never leaving the ground

One sleep encrusted eye opens

As mail is delivered from a blue-suited gent
Newspaper flopped onto stained wood

The beast is awakened
And sneaks up to his prey
He waits then POUNCES

As paper rain drenches down in torrents,
Flooding the lawn

He exuberates joy
Then RETREATS
Into the sanctity of His den

While the remains of his prey coat
the ground in a blanket of articles and advertisements

Copyright © Yovi ... [ 2008-12-11 01:33:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Dog (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 11th December 2008 @ 08:03:37 AM AEST
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quite funny really, although not for the postman lol an enjoyable read.

-phil

Re: Dog (User Rating: 1 )
by Mars on Thursday, 11th December 2008 @ 03:38:33 PM AEST
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Yes, it sharply changes from being all solemn to a very humorous undertone. Thanks for sharing it =).

Re: Dog (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Friday, 12th December 2008 @ 01:38:21 AM AEST
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Very funny! Got a good laugh outta this one. :o} Great Hunter! lol I've got one like that, only she likes paper towel tooters. Very entertaining read. Kudos!!
Thumpers ;o)

Re: Dog (User Rating: 1 )
by Jlokitty on Tuesday, 24th February 2009 @ 10:25:28 PM AEST
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aww hahaha!

Re: Dog (User Rating: 1 )
by vickil84 on Monday, 28th December 2009 @ 07:45:16 AM AEST
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I like this. Made me smile. Nice work x

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