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Goodbye to the Wind
Contributed by
NoSaint
on
Monday, 15th December 2008 @ 10:12:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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She stood on the ridge of mountain high
Around her the wind swirled magically
Arms to the sky she said her thanks
Turning she said good bye to the wind
She knew she had to go it alone
No help from zephyr or breeze
In the stillness she would face her fears
Alone she would walk the darkened path
To the forest she ran, her feet fleet
Over rocky hills and valleys low
To the spot she would meet her destiny
She would overcome and she would heal
The tree was gnarled and old
Long ago life had left its branches
She entered through a large hole
She walked and walked in circles
Then a shadow appeared
The darkness she held within
This was her time to fight
That which she did not want to face
Terrifying was the truth
For no one wants to deal
With their inner demons
This was her hour, her time had come
She would leave here
A woman whole and loving
Or in shambles
A babbling idiot
Will she make it alone?
Or will she be sorry?
She said goodbye to the wind
The answer remains to be seen
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NoSaint
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Re: Goodbye to the Wind
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by shelby on
Monday, 15th December 2008 @ 10:42:53 PM AEST
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Shari,
Words cannot express how striking a write this is.
I know your heart and feel your soul and I love you.
I will always be here. We have been together for years and there will be years more.
I felt this into my soul sis.
Hugs
I love you
Shall |
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Re: Goodbye to the Wind
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by karoody on
Tuesday, 16th December 2008 @ 02:35:26 AM AEST
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You have so much strength.
I know that strong woman will always prevail.
Hugs and love to you always
Kara |
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Re: Goodbye to the Wind
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th December 2008 @ 10:53:37 AM AEST
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some nice imagery, i like the fact that the answer is up to the reader, nice touch.
-phil |
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Re: Goodbye to the Wind
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 16th December 2008 @ 03:57:22 PM AEST
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Though she did not want to face the innerdemon..she has to fight now..
its her time.. she will win..
Great message and thought provoking.
my friend..this iswonderful write.
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Re: Goodbye to the Wind
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd January 2009 @ 02:05:56 AM AEST
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Wow, you really left us hangin' ! ! ! This is really an awesome write. The flow, the topic, the imagery. I was really getting into reading it and then...it ended. Wait..wait!!!! No, it cannot be....more!!!!
*applauds*
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