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Array ( [sid] => 146932 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => System Downtime [time] => 2008-12-19 17:33:12 [hometext] => [bodytext] => System Down Time.

Here's an update..

Human thought processes work by analogy,
From first principle
To inarticulate particle
It is understood by analogy.

This is why Poetry is still the purest
Of the arts and sciences muses
To the initiate.

It is the invention of new analogy.
Thus new ways of interpreting the universe from
Your unique axis in the net of everywhere.

Now, I've spent the past few days pursuing my passions
Sex and death.
Essentially private concerns
But as we've been told often enough
'Everybody needs a hoby' right?

Well, my hoby is alchahol fueled mainly.
I cost about as much to keep running as an Abrahms Tank
Or one of those American muscle cars,
Sometimes a Boeing if I'm seriously bending in the breeze.

I try to minimize the damage,
I mean it's willful but essentially private.

It also happens to be expensive
Sex and death
That is, if you do them both right.
As an artistic passion, a hoby right?

I have to eat though and being seperated from my erstwhile
Societal credential, Partner for tax purposes only, **** buddy,
Primary care giver and confident. That is my lover, is essentially
A bore, a chore and a distraction from my passions. It is also stressful.

So Sunday dozing till noon
With dowsing spirits, Rem picture and multiple mental mawkishness
Is essentially a system defrag and schedualled software update,
As the hardware pulsates and winds down
Pulsates and winds down.

All I can say is other than running
Other programs, that is new passions,
Other software as the system pulsates and winds down
There will be no system replacement.

Its a one off machine,
If your imagination runs that way
When thinking on a human being. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 143 [topic] => 64 [informant] => Incognito_Bombastus [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ambiguous )

System Downtime

Contributed by Incognito_Bombastus on Friday, 19th December 2008 @ 05:33:12 PM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous

System Down Time.

Here's an update..

Human thought processes work by analogy,
From first principle
To inarticulate particle
It is understood by analogy.

This is why Poetry is still the purest
Of the arts and sciences muses
To the initiate.

It is the invention of new analogy.
Thus new ways of interpreting the universe from
Your unique axis in the net of everywhere.

Now, I've spent the past few days pursuing my passions
Sex and death.
Essentially private concerns
But as we've been told often enough
'Everybody needs a hoby' right?

Well, my hoby is alchahol fueled mainly.
I cost about as much to keep running as an Abrahms Tank
Or one of those American muscle cars,
Sometimes a Boeing if I'm seriously bending in the breeze.

I try to minimize the damage,
I mean it's willful but essentially private.

It also happens to be expensive
Sex and death
That is, if you do them both right.
As an artistic passion, a hoby right?

I have to eat though and being seperated from my erstwhile
Societal credential, Partner for tax purposes only, **** buddy,
Primary care giver and confident. That is my lover, is essentially
A bore, a chore and a distraction from my passions. It is also stressful.

So Sunday dozing till noon
With dowsing spirits, Rem picture and multiple mental mawkishness
Is essentially a system defrag and schedualled software update,
As the hardware pulsates and winds down
Pulsates and winds down.

All I can say is other than running
Other programs, that is new passions,
Other software as the system pulsates and winds down
There will be no system replacement.

Its a one off machine,
If your imagination runs that way
When thinking on a human being.

Copyright © Incognito_Bombastus ... [ 2008-12-19 17:33:12]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: System Downtime (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 20th December 2008 @ 05:27:48 AM AEST
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a very exploratory and descriptive write I.B. slightly daring as well, i might add. you seem to scrape the outsides of reality off and bring them into the fray in the form of your poetry. your writes are always refreshing to read.

-phil

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