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Fading Sunset
Contributed by
Balmain_Tiger
on
Sunday, 21st December 2008 @ 06:11:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The sound of rustling leaves in trees
The cool breeze on my face
As I unwind I forget
This wretched human race
The ocean slapping on the beach
As I wash the blood stain
Off my face and hands
It begins to rain
A sun shower a gentle reminder
Nature at its best
Draws a smile from my face
What a wicked test
No answers for the blood
Just the solemn feeling inside
Of something bad and good
As I watch the ocean tide
Sirens in the background
I suppose its for me they come
My smile broadens on my lips
I remember a tune and start to hum!
Friday, 17 October 2008
8:35:25 AM
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Re: Fading Sunset
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Sunday, 21st December 2008 @ 06:19:09 AM AEST
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I simply do not make a habit of making a post on my own poems. But this one is just so weird and enticing, yet scary and morbid. I get scared that it came from me. I suppose because I can understand it....
It is not a place i go to often but occasionally I write from here.
I think it keeps me sane to realise that these can be the thoughts of a true psychotic.... or perhaps I have just read too many books |
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Re: Fading Sunset
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Monday, 22nd December 2008 @ 03:40:20 AM AEST
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this poem is verging on suicidal. although i can understand it completely. the world can be a cruel, lonely place at times. good write though.
-phil |
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