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Array ( [sid] => 147005 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Realization [time] => 2008-12-23 15:17:38 [hometext] => I wrote this as a means to express how I feel about the world. [bodytext] => Tender cherry blossoms swayed in the wind,
Surrounded by zephyr -- calmness, beauty,
Basking in the spring sun enlightened my soul.

To some, this would ignite bliss,
But I was not satisfied,
I needed affirmation.

Now, I wish for the world to reverse before I had sinned,
Hoping that I could just feel the zephyr,
Its reassurance that all would be well -- the Sun accompanying its glory,
Before I had committed the misconception.

I admired the apple on the Tree of Knowledge.

Captivating,
Inviting,
Addictive.

Upon first bite,
Realizing my demise,
My stupidity,
Ignorance.

Forced to exit the garden, I was unsure of the circumstances. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 64 [informant] => mariahneu1 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ambiguous )

A Realization

Contributed by mariahneu1 on Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 03:17:38 PM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous

Tender cherry blossoms swayed in the wind,
Surrounded by zephyr -- calmness, beauty,
Basking in the spring sun enlightened my soul.

To some, this would ignite bliss,
But I was not satisfied,
I needed affirmation.

Now, I wish for the world to reverse before I had sinned,
Hoping that I could just feel the zephyr,
Its reassurance that all would be well -- the Sun accompanying its glory,
Before I had committed the misconception.

I admired the apple on the Tree of Knowledge.

Captivating,
Inviting,
Addictive.

Upon first bite,
Realizing my demise,
My stupidity,
Ignorance.

Forced to exit the garden, I was unsure of the circumstances.

Copyright © mariahneu1 ... [ 2008-12-23 15:17:38]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: A Realization (User Rating: 1 )
by SilverRain on Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 03:33:50 PM AEST
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I very much enjoyed reading this.
You did an excellent job. Well done.

Re: A Realization (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 06:24:43 PM AEST
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a great retelling of the story of eve. it flowed well and you included some terrific imagery, great writing.

-phil

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