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Array ( [sid] => 147062 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => fallen angel [time] => 2008-12-27 10:01:54 [hometext] => [bodytext] => you rip my soul a sunder
and i wonder
as i gaze deep in to your verdant eyes
pondering do you love me
you silently reply
with a flicker of your eye
of course not
you turn hastily and gracefully away
how cruel
but im know fool
i pursue you
theres a trace of longing locked away
a secret
dancing on your lips
its not me
its not you
its the world around restrains our desires
your golden silken lace hair flutters playing in the air
you do care!
the world still
your voice a whisper
you say
it can not be
yu turn and flee from me
but i whisper back
I SEE

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 22 [informant] => fortunesdancer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
fallen angel

Contributed by fortunesdancer on Saturday, 27th December 2008 @ 10:01:54 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



you rip my soul a sunder
and i wonder
as i gaze deep in to your verdant eyes
pondering do you love me
you silently reply
with a flicker of your eye
of course not
you turn hastily and gracefully away
how cruel
but im know fool
i pursue you
theres a trace of longing locked away
a secret
dancing on your lips
its not me
its not you
its the world around restrains our desires
your golden silken lace hair flutters playing in the air
you do care!
the world still
your voice a whisper
you say
it can not be
yu turn and flee from me
but i whisper back
I SEE





Copyright © fortunesdancer ... [ 2008-12-27 10:01:54]
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Re: fallen angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 27th December 2008 @ 11:14:58 AM AEST
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good work, a beautiful read.

-Phil


Re: fallen angel (User Rating: 1 )
by djs on Sunday, 28th December 2008 @ 09:52:18 AM AEST
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this is one of the best poems i've read in a long time. your choice of words and their arrangement is great.




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