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Picket fence, quiet neighborhood
Living the American Dream
I'm living in a Dream
It took a lot to get here
Gave up so much for this
Waking up everyday
Still tired and aching
From the one before
But I wash my face
And go to work everyday anyway

Today was a hard day
Tonight will be more so
Same situation every time
But I've got that Dream
Picket fence, quiet neighborhood
We gave up so much to get here
Falling apart everyday
Tired and aching
From the one before
Without asking why
But we wash our faces
And go to work

Cash my check and drive home
Picket fence, quiet neighborhood
Living the American Dream
I'm living in a Dream
Weary from a hard day
Same as the one before
But I get up everyday
Without asking why
Wash my face
And go to work [comments] => 11 [counter] => 341 [topic] => 21 [informant] => karoody [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
Dreams

Contributed by karoody on Thursday, 1st January 2009 @ 04:09:25 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



I cash my check and drive home
Picket fence, quiet neighborhood
Living the American Dream
I'm living in a Dream
It took a lot to get here
Gave up so much for this
Waking up everyday
Still tired and aching
From the one before
But I wash my face
And go to work everyday anyway

Today was a hard day
Tonight will be more so
Same situation every time
But I've got that Dream
Picket fence, quiet neighborhood
We gave up so much to get here
Falling apart everyday
Tired and aching
From the one before
Without asking why
But we wash our faces
And go to work

Cash my check and drive home
Picket fence, quiet neighborhood
Living the American Dream
I'm living in a Dream
Weary from a hard day
Same as the one before
But I get up everyday
Without asking why
Wash my face
And go to work




Copyright © karoody ... [ 2009-01-01 16:09:25]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Mars on Thursday, 1st January 2009 @ 04:19:00 PM AEST
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We do waste so much time dreaming about the future, but failing to act upon them. Good write =P.


Re: Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 1st January 2009 @ 06:46:49 PM AEST
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Hi Kara...this is very realistic... Yes, we all have dreams and wish they would come true some day, but we also need to stand firmly on the ground....
Miss you grrlfriend..
Hugs
Jenni


Re: Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Thursday, 1st January 2009 @ 07:42:51 PM AEST
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I can relate to this write so well, maybe its because I live part of this everyday. Hi Kara..
very good write my friend. Vincent


Re: Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 1st January 2009 @ 08:08:31 PM AEST
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Great write, as always, Karabeara! My associative memory kicked in with this one. Kinda reminded me of when I was married. Made me think of her going through those motions and once again.....did she leave someone again just to see if she could find that grass that's always greener on the other side?

Anyways, I like it. Keep it up.

Me
:-)


Re: Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by exiled on Friday, 2nd January 2009 @ 02:21:08 AM AEST
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Kara, I started balling when I read this. You have no idea how hard this hit me right in the heart. I have always sacrificed and put my wants and needs aside for the people I love and care about even if it meant I would have nothing. Thank you so much for writing this.


Sam


Re: Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Voice of the Silent on Friday, 2nd January 2009 @ 07:39:04 PM AEST
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great write glad to see your writing again
hope to read more soon
-kelly


Re: Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Loende on Sunday, 4th January 2009 @ 12:42:19 AM AEST
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Kara...

This is an honest portrait and dedication to the unsung heros who just press on, doing what they do. It made me a bit melancholy, but then I don't even have the Dream Picket Fence, so it's a bit of woe-is-me-ism. It's really a lovely piece. Thank you for sharing it.

Be well,
Loende


Re: Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Monday, 12th January 2009 @ 03:59:02 PM AEST
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A true american poetic treasure,
simply stunning in it's portrayal
of reality in it's most revealing of
all presentations, the american
made, worker . . .


thank you kindly also
for your read and nice
comment, take care . . .



Ben : )


Re: Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Sasha on Wednesday, 18th November 2009 @ 07:07:21 PM AEST
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Beautifully expressed... I loved this poem!


Re: Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Thursday, 19th November 2009 @ 04:15:02 PM AEST
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This poem drew me into the sadness

of you and left me breathless amidst

your innocense, as of now, i'm once

more reminded of the awesome artistry

you posess along with the tenderness

dwelling in your emotions, indeed,

a lovely write to behold.




Ben . . .


Re: Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 2nd July 2014 @ 09:25:25 PM AEST
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so real it breathes...................

hugs n' love nessa




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