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Array ( [sid] => 147167 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Flourish [time] => 2009-01-01 19:25:43 [hometext] => I`ve been around this site about 6years..let Me introduce Myself.. [bodytext] => ...and I do detest the sins
and with heart..
god-almighty don`t be frightened,
I can only be what you make me.

I have had My victims
and "hides stretched on walls
till the curtains reeked
and the Sun burnt me.

In the trial days I flourished
and notched the boat-side
with some form of regret.

There is no pedigree
no lasting "saying..
We all speak together
at different intervals.

...but I am a man
that refuses to lay-down
with dirty hands, in soiled clothes....Vincent

[comments] => 5 [counter] => 240 [topic] => 21 [informant] => crow [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Flourish

Contributed by crow on Thursday, 1st January 2009 @ 07:25:43 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

...and I do detest the sins
and with heart..
god-almighty don`t be frightened,
I can only be what you make me.

I have had My victims
and "hides stretched on walls
till the curtains reeked
and the Sun burnt me.

In the trial days I flourished
and notched the boat-side
with some form of regret.

There is no pedigree
no lasting "saying..
We all speak together
at different intervals.

...but I am a man
that refuses to lay-down
with dirty hands, in soiled clothes....Vincent

Copyright © crow ... [ 2009-01-01 19:25:43]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Flourish (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 1st January 2009 @ 08:12:22 PM AEST
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I am not quite sure I get it but I still like it.

I especially like this stanza:

There is no pedigree
no lasting "saying..
We all speak together
at different intervals.

Yeah, that's really cool.

Take care.

Tim
:-)

Re: Flourish (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Friday, 2nd January 2009 @ 12:49:53 AM AEST
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Great writing coming from your pen lately
I enjoyed this one a lot
I loved you at the end especially
You shall never lie down
With dirty hands
Love Smiles And Blessings Always
Kara

Re: Flourish (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 2nd January 2009 @ 04:32:25 PM AEST
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I'm with Tim on this one... sorry...
Jenni

Re: Flourish (User Rating: 1 )
by Voice of the Silent on Friday, 2nd January 2009 @ 09:17:44 PM AEST
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I like it but at the same time parts of it confuse me but the parts I understand are great
great write and hope to read more soon
-kelly

Re: Flourish (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 4th January 2009 @ 12:38:45 AM AEST
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Whooooo damn magic man where did it come from do tell. This is so like you but then not. Your writes of late so damn super powerful. Knocked me off my sleeper bed (picking myself off the floor) LOL

Serious this rocks my man!

Hugs N kissy poo
Love u
Shall

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