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A broken heart that leaves blood stains
Fading memories and a soiled destiny
Plagued with the intesity of disdain
A love sick soul laced heavy with pain
And a million emotions I can't explain or contain
Hold me up because with each breath I shatter a little more
Pieces of my existance scattered across the floor
Like an empty home constructed of broken bones
A glass empire built on a mountain of stones
The damage is out of control
And the movement of time bares no relief to my tortured soul
Still I manage to breathe and exist
On hands and knees with broken wrists
Waiting....and waiting for you
Because they say patience is a virtue
And the world knows I'd do anything for you
Give up a million breaths and die a million deaths
Come back from the grave
An angel destined to be a slave
A slave to your existance and the love you will not give
Dying slowly as I live
And all I can do is hope that you have the heart to forgive
Forgive me....for loving you.
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Poisoned Remains.

Contributed by Bleedthelove on Tuesday, 6th January 2009 @ 07:36:33 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I'm poisoned with the remains
A broken heart that leaves blood stains
Fading memories and a soiled destiny
Plagued with the intesity of disdain
A love sick soul laced heavy with pain
And a million emotions I can't explain or contain
Hold me up because with each breath I shatter a little more
Pieces of my existance scattered across the floor
Like an empty home constructed of broken bones
A glass empire built on a mountain of stones
The damage is out of control
And the movement of time bares no relief to my tortured soul
Still I manage to breathe and exist
On hands and knees with broken wrists
Waiting....and waiting for you
Because they say patience is a virtue
And the world knows I'd do anything for you
Give up a million breaths and die a million deaths
Come back from the grave
An angel destined to be a slave
A slave to your existance and the love you will not give
Dying slowly as I live
And all I can do is hope that you have the heart to forgive
Forgive me....for loving you.

Copyright © Bleedthelove ... [ 2009-01-06 19:36:33]
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Re: Poisoned Remains. (User Rating: 1 )
by catz77 on Tuesday, 6th January 2009 @ 07:41:25 PM AEST
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Other than some misspelled words it flowed nicely.
^_^ I enjoyed the read although it is a sad poem.

-Catz

Re: Poisoned Remains. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 6th January 2009 @ 11:53:58 PM AEST
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There is some poems which have more spelling mistakes... that's why this poem is much and much more better.... :) I like it very much
This is real Life poem..
cheers

Re: Poisoned Remains. (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 7th January 2009 @ 01:28:04 AM AEST
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Very powerful write. Sad but incredible strong.
Huggs, blessings,
emy

Re: Poisoned Remains. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 7th January 2009 @ 04:49:31 AM AEST
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very sad but very good. loved it. but careful with spelling =P

Re: Poisoned Remains. (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Wednesday, 7th January 2009 @ 08:41:44 AM AEST
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This is good
well done.

Re: Poisoned Remains. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 15th December 2009 @ 05:15:27 PM AEST
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This piece is morbidly divine.
You can't help but to feel crushed by blackness,
.(The damage is out of control) wonderfully caotic line
Truly well versed

-D.Truth

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