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Array ( [sid] => 147566 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Barack Hussain Obama (An Acrostic Panegyric) Revised [time] => 2009-01-22 20:41:01 [hometext] => This piece of composition is in the praise of Barack Hussain Obama newly elected president of U.S.A.; the present time calls forth Barack Hussain Obama for greater courage and precision to face the challenges to fetch out humanity from the quagmire of con [bodytext] => Black beauty agleam with beams,
Audacious advocate with capacious brain,
Relentful representative of the West,
Adroit, harbinger of good tidings,
Courageous, chivalrous and gallant from the heart,
Kindhearted, and compassionate to the grieved.

Harmonious in intents, thoughts and actions,
Undisguised, uniformed in outer and inner-self,
Scrupulous: seeks guidance from the celestial laws,
Saviour: he is to rescue the world out of the conflicts,
Auspicious whom history has sought for years,
Illuminated with the spirit to serve the downtrodden,
Nobility all wrapped, incarnated in human grandeur.

Onerous captain deemed to steer the ship with
Beacons of hope through the region of confusions;
Astute orator, heals he cuts with the balm of words,
Meticulous, cautious he is in decision making,
Adorable equally in the West and in the East too.
Barack Hussain Obama

By
Muhammad Shanazar
From Pakistan
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Barack Hussain Obama (An Acrostic Panegyric) Revised

Contributed by MuhammadShanazar on Thursday, 22nd January 2009 @ 08:41:01 PM in AEST
Topic: CongratulatoryPoems

Black beauty agleam with beams,
Audacious advocate with capacious brain,
Relentful representative of the West,
Adroit, harbinger of good tidings,
Courageous, chivalrous and gallant from the heart,
Kindhearted, and compassionate to the grieved.

Harmonious in intents, thoughts and actions,
Undisguised, uniformed in outer and inner-self,
Scrupulous: seeks guidance from the celestial laws,
Saviour: he is to rescue the world out of the conflicts,
Auspicious whom history has sought for years,
Illuminated with the spirit to serve the downtrodden,
Nobility all wrapped, incarnated in human grandeur.

Onerous captain deemed to steer the ship with
Beacons of hope through the region of confusions;
Astute orator, heals he cuts with the balm of words,
Meticulous, cautious he is in decision making,
Adorable equally in the West and in the East too.
Barack Hussain Obama

By
Muhammad Shanazar
From Pakistan
shanazar@hotmail.com

Copyright © MuhammadShanazar ... [ 2009-01-22 20:41:01]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Barack Hussain Obama (An Acrostic Panegyric) Revised (User Rating: 1 )
by zenith66 on Thursday, 22nd January 2009 @ 09:20:21 PM AEST
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i have nothing agianst obama as a man., and i dont want to star a war here lol. but obama is already breaking promises. i could go so much deeper if you wanted to pm but let me tell you that all is not what it seems, teh rabbit hole goes deep i should say lol,

if you have anything to ask me ill be more then happy to chat"""

Re: Barack Hussain Obama (An Acrostic Panegyric) Revised (User Rating: 1 )
by EcuaOrgullo310 on Thursday, 22nd January 2009 @ 10:15:07 PM AEST
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I just have to say, I have nothing against this president, but... I think he's seriously over rated. One thing... Has any other president had babies named after him before even being elected? or has anyone else wrote poems about any other president? I mean, do you get what I mean? I mean, I congratulate the guy for winning and everything, but the praise, adoration, and service people want to give him his ridiculous. I mean, if he's a good president, then great. seriously.. good for him and our country.
I didn't mean to offend you or anything, cuz your poem was actually really good. Really heartfelt.
But that's just my opinion on this issue.

Re: Barack Hussain Obama (An Acrostic Panegyric) Revised (User Rating: 1 )
by iodinelove on Friday, 23rd January 2009 @ 12:19:53 AM AEST
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The content is here nor there for me, but it is in my opinion that an excessive amount of large words ruins a poem.

Write Simply.

Re: Barack Hussain Obama (An Acrostic Panegyric) Revised (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Friday, 23rd January 2009 @ 11:51:11 AM AEST
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I am moved by your gracious tribute to our newly elected leader of this country. To have such appeal & sincere regard from so many individuals in our nation & throughout world community is truely a wonderous & honourable accomplishment for any one man. It stands to reason, that in these times of war & strive, struggle & suffering, that humanity seeks a voice unlike all others. One lead by the supreme Lord of this & every universe, of all things. . . let us bless each other & keeping in the spirit of love, realize that we all do the best we can for who we are, at any given time. I feel this is the pledge of any man, woman or group who embark to lead a nation, serve a cause, shield an innocent, teach a child, free the oppressed, save precious knowledge or resource. . . any & every good thing. What we express to others in life we will encounter for ourselves. I feel Obama is a good man. . . when we bless others they will bless us as well. . . this universe is reciprocal. peace. elle

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