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Array ( [sid] => 147590 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Stay My Friend.. [time] => 2009-01-24 00:24:36 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Stay My Friend

the night lark
sings
offering her heart.
reclining moon,
as if, a half-lit kerosene lamp
dangles,
drenched in ceaseless pain
pining,
warmth of
a distant
last star of the night..

stay my friend, the night is yet to end

Searing my being, my heart, the soul
searches in eternal vain
unexplained questions of my
distressed mind..
as though stray birds, yearning
to take wings
across the vast blue
of ever receding horizon
the unknown quest..

Elusive …
fire-flies in the mist
my inner being, the farthest
recess of my mind reaches
to possess what is unreal
an enigmatic, mystifying end..

your final embrace,
dimpled smile, your anguished tears
it etches
one more writhing pain
to the story of my life..

stay, stay my friend
this night…
till the last lingering flicker
of the lamp ends..
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 259 [topic] => 2 [informant] => dilrubay [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Stay My Friend..

Contributed by dilrubay on Saturday, 24th January 2009 @ 12:24:36 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Stay My Friend

the night lark
sings
offering her heart.
reclining moon,
as if, a half-lit kerosene lamp
dangles,
drenched in ceaseless pain
pining,
warmth of
a distant
last star of the night..

stay my friend, the night is yet to end

Searing my being, my heart, the soul
searches in eternal vain
unexplained questions of my
distressed mind..
as though stray birds, yearning
to take wings
across the vast blue
of ever receding horizon
the unknown quest..

Elusive …
fire-flies in the mist
my inner being, the farthest
recess of my mind reaches
to possess what is unreal
an enigmatic, mystifying end..

your final embrace,
dimpled smile, your anguished tears
it etches
one more writhing pain
to the story of my life..

stay, stay my friend
this night…
till the last lingering flicker
of the lamp ends..

Copyright Â© dilrubay ... [ 2009-01-24 00:24:36]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Stay My Friend.. (User Rating: 1 )
by moumita on Saturday, 24th January 2009 @ 11:09:15 AM AEST
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nothing is there to come , and
nothing past , but an eternal
now does always last !

hope the night will over
and new sun will rise
with new hope n joy .

very nice poem .
thnx a lot aapu .

Re: Stay My Friend.. (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Saturday, 24th January 2009 @ 12:26:38 PM AEST
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I agree, very nice. I love the ending. peace. elle

Re: Stay My Friend.. (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Saturday, 24th January 2009 @ 05:52:03 PM AEST
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There was an atmospheric and soothing quality about this, it all knitted together perfectly.
Thanks for sharing

Steve

Re: Stay My Friend.. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 25th January 2009 @ 09:14:56 AM AEST
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the imagery was world class. it was a joy to read.

the night lark
sings
offering her heart.
reclining moon,
as if, a half-lit kerosene lamp
dangles,

i loved this bit, wonderful.

-phil

Re: Stay My Friend.. (User Rating: 1 )
by shuronjona on Tuesday, 27th January 2009 @ 11:38:50 PM AEST
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oshadharon. apurbaaa.
mone pore oi ganti, na, jeyona,
rajani ekhono baki.......
onek sundar hoyeche.
oneeeek shafollo kamona korchi.
bokulbalaaaa love u very much.

Re: Stay My Friend.. (User Rating: 1 )
by shuronjona on Tuesday, 27th January 2009 @ 11:39:33 PM AEST
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oshadharon. apurbaaa.
mone pore oi ganti, na, jeyona,
rajani ekhono baki.......
onek sundar hoyeche.
oneeeek shafollo kamona korchi.
bokulbalaaaa love u very much.

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