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Array ( [sid] => 147631 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Loving still? [time] => 2009-01-25 22:35:19 [hometext] => people make it hard at times [bodytext] => A warmth in the chill of winter,
smile to hide the shame.
Gathering thoughts adrift.
Loving should not be this way.

Open the heart with trust.
Titles are not what one needs.
Somewhere in the mix,
money and greed comes before it.

Kindred the spirit in mist.
Vapor that carries all away.
When do we decide
it is time to give or push it away?

Love should not be with condition.
Hearts bared and open to all.
Like the tree bare of leaf
on a frozen winters day.

No in between either or,
it needs to be true all around.
If we cannot come together
then all concerned is hell ward bound.

Breath of frost on the air,
tears will fall once more.
Death to the thought and what ifs
it is just what it has become.

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Loving still?

Contributed by shelby on Sunday, 25th January 2009 @ 10:35:19 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

A warmth in the chill of winter,
smile to hide the shame.
Gathering thoughts adrift.
Loving should not be this way.

Open the heart with trust.
Titles are not what one needs.
Somewhere in the mix,
money and greed comes before it.

Kindred the spirit in mist.
Vapor that carries all away.
When do we decide
it is time to give or push it away?

Love should not be with condition.
Hearts bared and open to all.
Like the tree bare of leaf
on a frozen winters day.

No in between either or,
it needs to be true all around.
If we cannot come together
then all concerned is hell ward bound.

Breath of frost on the air,
tears will fall once more.
Death to the thought and what ifs
it is just what it has become.

Copyright © shelby ... [ 2009-01-25 22:35:19]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Loving still? (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 25th January 2009 @ 10:50:53 PM AEST
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Sad girl but oh so true.
Hang tuff, my friend.
wuvs ya,
emy

Re: Loving still? (User Rating: 1 )
by Recyclebin on Sunday, 25th January 2009 @ 11:47:47 PM AEST
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I concur with Miss Elle.... But I have saying... Doesnt bother me my heart is filled with sadness...just means that I desire happiness. ;o)
Excellent write my friend.

~Bin~

Re: Loving still? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 26th January 2009 @ 02:16:32 AM AEST
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Son of a censored!!!! I could not have said it better. Damn straight, Love should not be with condition . There are a few people I would like you to talk to, Michelle. They need to hear your words of wisdom.

Excellent, excellent, write. Oh, and did I mention this was an excellent write?

Take care,

Tim

Re: Loving still? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 27th January 2009 @ 04:30:19 PM AEST
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This poem is so true, love should be unconditional not conditional. However it seems only animals understand that kind of love! Great write!

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