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Array ( [sid] => 147655 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => everytime I write [time] => 2009-01-26 22:20:21 [hometext] => [bodytext] => there may be a few spelling errors but it should be okay I think it's legable. I don't even think I spelt that right..

It just makes me want to scream
everytime I write
it falls apart at the seems
It seems I have to fight
just to post a write
I forgot one important thing
the blew everything to smitherines
to click the all important post
I was so close
It was something new
I would show you
But I don't know what to do
I guess it's just lost
Line after line
lost can't even find it in my mind [comments] => 4 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Voice of the Silent [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

everytime I write

Contributed by Voice of the Silent on Monday, 26th January 2009 @ 10:20:21 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

there may be a few spelling errors but it should be okay I think it's legable. I don't even think I spelt that right..

It just makes me want to scream
everytime I write
it falls apart at the seems
It seems I have to fight
just to post a write
I forgot one important thing
the blew everything to smitherines
to click the all important post
I was so close
It was something new
I would show you
But I don't know what to do
I guess it's just lost
Line after line
lost can't even find it in my mind

Copyright © Voice of the Silent ... [ 2009-01-26 22:20:21]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: everytime I write (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 26th January 2009 @ 11:06:19 PM AEST
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Spelling errors don't bother me. I have my own language and spellin, (anexample) I know it's spelled spelling but hey, we have poetic liscence that gives us the freedom to write whatever.
Really good writing.
It'll probably pop up.
Big huggs, smiles, blessings,
emy

Re: everytime I write (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Tuesday, 27th January 2009 @ 03:13:05 AM AEST
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Sorry, unless you are deliberately misspelling for the character of the poem, there is no excuse for poor spelling when pcs have spell check and YPDC has moderators to do it for you - it's just plain lazy.

So please, don't apologise for spelling mistakes - fix it before you post!

Re: everytime I write (User Rating: 1 )
by fanniesson on Tuesday, 27th January 2009 @ 08:43:22 AM AEST
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Good attempt at expressing your frustration
in that age problem for most writers.
Losing ones thoughts

Re: everytime I write (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 27th January 2009 @ 04:32:35 PM AEST
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Nice write but I find it helpful to write the poem down before posting it here. That way if it doesn't work, I can try another day!

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