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Array ( [sid] => 147664 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Unrequited Love [time] => 2009-01-27 10:47:01 [hometext] => I am still in a depressed state of mind for this one... [bodytext] => I can feel it
Can you
It is strong
I can’t move
I need help
Can’t escape
Falling
Ready to break
My love
My hate
Never quite right
Never the same
Lost
Broken
All I have been
And will be
Confused
Hurt
From you
Yet I love you
Don’t know why
Yet I do
And will
Why?
I ask
No answer
Stuck
Numb
Waiting
For nothing
Feels like this
It hurts
It burns
I ache
You take
I cry
For you
You don’t care
Or notice
I love you
You don’t love me
Never did
Not really
It was a lie
Not truth
Just more pain
In me
From you
Your unforgiving eyes
Tears
Grief
Blame
I took it all
It was never enough
For you
I tried
I tried
So hard
I cried
Too many tears
Nothing
It was for nothing
I wasted myself
Loving you
I still do
Agony
Fear
I felt it all
I held it all
Just to love you
Cost everything
Life
Trust
Love
Strength
Peace
Faith
You never noticed
Never loved
It is I
Who hurts
Who cries
Who dies inside
Not you
But I
Forever
Held inside this life
For you
And you
Have
Left me
Hated me
Given up on me
Hurt me
I was
Not what you wanted
Just what you had
But I love you
And hate myself
Yet
I shouldn’t
Should
Hate you
But can’t
And won’t
For reasons
Unknown
Impossible
I tried
I failed
You hated
You won
I’m gone
I’m numb
I walk
With no purpose
Waiting to die
For I love you
I do
I cry for you
I admit
But I hate myself
Don’t understand
But I have no life
Not anymore
Not ever
It’s gone
Lost in the shadows
The blackness
Of
Unrequited Love
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Unrequited Love

Contributed by butterflyperfect on Tuesday, 27th January 2009 @ 10:47:01 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



I can feel it
Can you
It is strong
I can’t move
I need help
Can’t escape
Falling
Ready to break
My love
My hate
Never quite right
Never the same
Lost
Broken
All I have been
And will be
Confused
Hurt
From you
Yet I love you
Don’t know why
Yet I do
And will
Why?
I ask
No answer
Stuck
Numb
Waiting
For nothing
Feels like this
It hurts
It burns
I ache
You take
I cry
For you
You don’t care
Or notice
I love you
You don’t love me
Never did
Not really
It was a lie
Not truth
Just more pain
In me
From you
Your unforgiving eyes
Tears
Grief
Blame
I took it all
It was never enough
For you
I tried
I tried
So hard
I cried
Too many tears
Nothing
It was for nothing
I wasted myself
Loving you
I still do
Agony
Fear
I felt it all
I held it all
Just to love you
Cost everything
Life
Trust
Love
Strength
Peace
Faith
You never noticed
Never loved
It is I
Who hurts
Who cries
Who dies inside
Not you
But I
Forever
Held inside this life
For you
And you
Have
Left me
Hated me
Given up on me
Hurt me
I was
Not what you wanted
Just what you had
But I love you
And hate myself
Yet
I shouldn’t
Should
Hate you
But can’t
And won’t
For reasons
Unknown
Impossible
I tried
I failed
You hated
You won
I’m gone
I’m numb
I walk
With no purpose
Waiting to die
For I love you
I do
I cry for you
I admit
But I hate myself
Don’t understand
But I have no life
Not anymore
Not ever
It’s gone
Lost in the shadows
The blackness
Of
Unrequited Love




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Re: Unrequited Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 27th January 2009 @ 12:51:48 PM AEST
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yes, i know this feeling all too well. you pretty much summed up all the angst and hurt that comes with it.

-phil




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