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Array ( [sid] => 147712 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => One Last Try [time] => 2009-01-30 00:44:27 [hometext] => This poem is one I had written about a year ago, it is one of the only poems I have left from when I still wrote. I lost everything due to a computer malfunction, but if I had one to save it would have been this one. [bodytext] => Darkest Light


All the pain
And all the lies
Are sad reminders of the tries

To live
To love
To laugh
To cry
To lose or gain and wonder why

My heart remains full of hope
Only to be gagged and choked
Stabbed and bled until it's dry
My heart sits dead and wonders...
Why?

Is it the end?
Is it nigh?
Shall I give love one last try

Lonely days
Lonely nights

Lonely wrongs
No rights

Cut me loose
Turn me free
Release me from this misery

Fill me up
Drain me out
See my eyes
Scream and shout

Burning flame
In my heart
Burning flame burn this art

Art of love
Art of passion
Art of misery
To be rationed
One by one we all fall down
One by one we smile and frown

Make my way into the light
Find its dark
Dark as night

O’ Darkest Light
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 492 [topic] => 22 [informant] => DevinHman [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
One Last Try

Contributed by DevinHman on Friday, 30th January 2009 @ 12:44:27 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Darkest Light


All the pain
And all the lies
Are sad reminders of the tries

To live
To love
To laugh
To cry
To lose or gain and wonder why

My heart remains full of hope
Only to be gagged and choked
Stabbed and bled until it's dry
My heart sits dead and wonders...
Why?

Is it the end?
Is it nigh?
Shall I give love one last try

Lonely days
Lonely nights

Lonely wrongs
No rights

Cut me loose
Turn me free
Release me from this misery

Fill me up
Drain me out
See my eyes
Scream and shout

Burning flame
In my heart
Burning flame burn this art

Art of love
Art of passion
Art of misery
To be rationed
One by one we all fall down
One by one we smile and frown

Make my way into the light
Find its dark
Dark as night

O’ Darkest Light




Copyright © DevinHman ... [ 2009-01-30 00:44:27]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: One Last Try (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Young_Poet on Saturday, 31st January 2009 @ 11:16:49 AM AEST
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oh this was so good.


Re: One Last Try (User Rating: 1 )
by ItsMeNow on Saturday, 21st February 2009 @ 05:27:44 PM AEST
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Yes I liked this a lot. I used to write in this form short verses rhyming last word. somewhere along the way that changed not the rhyming just the ability to form short verses and still convey strong writing ability. Good job keep it up.




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