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Array ( [sid] => 147725 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Release Me [time] => 2009-01-31 13:25:03 [hometext] => new poem written today 31.01.09 [bodytext] => Release me after all these years,
You’ve had your fill, you’ve bathed in tears,
You stole my all, what made me, me,
You set your trap and I’ll never feel free.

Every night you lay by my side,
Leaving me no place to hide,
Breathing heavily down my ear,
Freezing my soul with horror and fear.

Please release me, I’ll never tell,
Just of the torture and the hell,
Your secrets safe, I will be brave,
I’ll carry it with me into my grave.

You’ve had your fun with this mere toy,
You’ve had your glory and your joy,
There’s nothing left for you to take,
Please just allow me to escape.

I’ve been your puppet on a string,
I’ve long coward beneath your wing,
Served you well my faithful master,
I gave you all for here and after.

You want my soul, yet it’s already yours,
You raped my mind, made it your whore,
You used my body then tossed it away,
You put me through this day after day.

Please release me I won’t breathe a word,
What you did will forever be unheard,
I’ll keep it all wrapped deep inside,
Because no part of me is left that hasn’t died.

You killed my world, you choked my dreams,
You picked my sanity at its seams,
‘til it unravelled in front of your eyes,
And how your laughter drowned my cries.

You took me unwilling into your bed,
Played with my body, played with my head,
Told me things, twisted my mind,
That girl you met is now impossible to find.

She is but a shadow, a walking corpse,
And all things dark her soul absorbs,
Just wandering lost in your baron land,
With you watching, holding her hand.

Death would be her only release,
For her, the torment then would cease,
But you won’t allow it to come to an end,
You want to break her so she can’t mend.

Your cruel laugh rattles in her bones,
Never letting up, leaving her alone,
Forever chained and forever bound,
Her soul comes crashing, never making a sound.











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Release Me

Contributed by pixie on Saturday, 31st January 2009 @ 01:25:03 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Release me after all these years,
You’ve had your fill, you’ve bathed in tears,
You stole my all, what made me, me,
You set your trap and I’ll never feel free.

Every night you lay by my side,
Leaving me no place to hide,
Breathing heavily down my ear,
Freezing my soul with horror and fear.

Please release me, I’ll never tell,
Just of the torture and the hell,
Your secrets safe, I will be brave,
I’ll carry it with me into my grave.

You’ve had your fun with this mere toy,
You’ve had your glory and your joy,
There’s nothing left for you to take,
Please just allow me to escape.

I’ve been your puppet on a string,
I’ve long coward beneath your wing,
Served you well my faithful master,
I gave you all for here and after.

You want my soul, yet it’s already yours,
You raped my mind, made it your whore,
You used my body then tossed it away,
You put me through this day after day.

Please release me I won’t breathe a word,
What you did will forever be unheard,
I’ll keep it all wrapped deep inside,
Because no part of me is left that hasn’t died.

You killed my world, you choked my dreams,
You picked my sanity at its seams,
‘til it unravelled in front of your eyes,
And how your laughter drowned my cries.

You took me unwilling into your bed,
Played with my body, played with my head,
Told me things, twisted my mind,
That girl you met is now impossible to find.

She is but a shadow, a walking corpse,
And all things dark her soul absorbs,
Just wandering lost in your baron land,
With you watching, holding her hand.

Death would be her only release,
For her, the torment then would cease,
But you won’t allow it to come to an end,
You want to break her so she can’t mend.

Your cruel laugh rattles in her bones,
Never letting up, leaving her alone,
Forever chained and forever bound,
Her soul comes crashing, never making a sound.















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Re: Release Me (User Rating: 1 )
by tifrob on Saturday, 31st January 2009 @ 09:42:54 PM AEST
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You're wrong Pixie, I heard the sound loud and cllear.
This is more than a poem. This is "ART" at its
finest... This is a small epic and your readers sees the
strenth in your shell of a person. This person may be
scared but she still has a glimmer of HOPE. If this is
a poem keep it going. Develope this story line.
Because this is a brillant piece of work.

On the other hand, if it is true. Go umderground
and run-like-hell... I'm sure that you have many friends here
at YPDC that would help. Count me in. Either way,
keep this going. You could publish an epic poem in
plain english....

~Me~

P.S. By the way, I loved it.




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