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Would you see your lovely eyes
Would you see your kindness that you show
Towards me
If you were me would you like what you see
If you were me would you understand why
I picked you
When you see what I see maybe you will
Understand
Just because other people don't see how Nice you are doesn't mean that I don't
You see what others see
I like you for that
And for that I thank you [comments] => 8 [counter] => 302 [topic] => 37 [informant] => PhantomsBBYgrl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ThankYouPoems )

You See

Contributed by PhantomsBBYgrl on Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 04:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: ThankYouPoems

If you were me what would you see
Would you see your lovely eyes
Would you see your kindness that you show
Towards me
If you were me would you like what you see
If you were me would you understand why
I picked you
When you see what I see maybe you will
Understand
Just because other people don't see how Nice you are doesn't mean that I don't
You see what others see
I like you for that
And for that I thank you

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Re: You See (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 04:40:49 AM AEST
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Awww..this is sweet!!!
Jenni

Re: You See (User Rating: 1 )
by The-solo-subject on Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 04:43:25 AM AEST
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Great write. I bet The Phantom is proud of you.

The-Solo-Subject

Re: You See (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Phantom on Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 04:48:46 AM AEST
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Well now sweetie, and who was this for? Anyway it was another great write, you must have taken after me. LOL.

The Phantom

Re: You See (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 08:24:16 AM AEST
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DANG The whole family are poets!
Great peice here! Keep writing! Christina

Re: You See (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 01:33:32 PM AEST
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this is very sweet and lovingly written, i especially admire, "Would you see your lovely eyes
Would you see your kindness that you show"
it really gives a vivid view into another's soul, huggs to you, nessa

Re: You See (User Rating: 1 )
by kims4ever on Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 04:27:46 PM AEST
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This poem has made me think of a special someone that is one of the few people I open up to. And i thank them for writing this. Hugs 4 ever.

Re: You See (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomsLDY on Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 11:19:59 PM AEST
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Steve must be someone more special than I realized for him to inspire such a beautiful poem. And no matter what Dad says I think you take after me your style is more like mine....LOL.

Re: You See (User Rating: 1 )
by boricuacd on Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 12:44:48 PM AEST
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Great Job!! Keep up the great writing.

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