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Array ( [sid] => 147841 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => guardian angel [time] => 2009-02-07 17:10:35 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I sat there on the brink of death,
and you brought me a new life,
i sat there and i cut myself,
you took away the knife.
i beat you and abused you
but you always stood by my side.
i shouted all the names at you
you took it in your stride.
i kicked and punched against the world
you shown me the right way
i tried to die inside my sleep
but you woke me every day.
so as i sit here thinking,
with a drink in my hand
i feel you watching over me
the second footprints in the sand.
but why do you save me?
whats in this deal for you?
i'll meet you at my natural death
and all the answers too.

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guardian angel

Contributed by blackholesun2006 on Saturday, 7th February 2009 @ 05:10:35 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I sat there on the brink of death,
and you brought me a new life,
i sat there and i cut myself,
you took away the knife.
i beat you and abused you
but you always stood by my side.
i shouted all the names at you
you took it in your stride.
i kicked and punched against the world
you shown me the right way
i tried to die inside my sleep
but you woke me every day.
so as i sit here thinking,
with a drink in my hand
i feel you watching over me
the second footprints in the sand.
but why do you save me?
whats in this deal for you?
i'll meet you at my natural death
and all the answers too.

Copyright © blackholesun2006 ... [ 2009-02-07 17:10:35]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: guardian angel (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 7th February 2009 @ 05:44:04 PM AEST
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deep and full of truth,

love n' hugs nessa

Re: guardian angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Mars on Saturday, 7th February 2009 @ 10:38:32 PM AEST
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Indeed. My favorite part is the fourth line. So nice to see more people using this rhyme scheme, I suppose this small world isn't so small after all =P. I am not quite sure that I understand the 'took it in your stride' part, but anyway, a nice poem. I can relate to this. 5 stars =).

Re: guardian angel (User Rating: 1 )
by mooshken26 on Monday, 13th April 2009 @ 04:53:46 PM AEST
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This is a great poem, everyone has a gaurdian angel and some of us ask the questions that you do - I like the lines - I tried to die inside my sleep, but you woke me every day - it expresses the feeling of sorrow so well.

xx Moosh xx

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