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Array ( [sid] => 147988 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The sky is falling. [time] => 2009-02-16 01:27:45 [hometext] => [bodytext] => If the sky were to fall,
would you think of me?
If I wiped all my tears away,
would you see?
If the stars were to speak,
would they know our names?
Would they know all there is
to these childish games?
My head's such a mess;
You're all that it knows,
with rhymes and no reason;
Like a thorn on a rose.
My mind screams,Let him go!
but my heart knows me better;
Like a magnet attracted,
or a never-sent letter.
So tell me, old lover,
if the sky fell today,
would you think of me?
Or would you're thoughts go astray? [comments] => 5 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 22 [informant] => sexypantz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

The sky is falling.

Contributed by sexypantz on Monday, 16th February 2009 @ 01:27:45 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

If the sky were to fall,
would you think of me?
If I wiped all my tears away,
would you see?
If the stars were to speak,
would they know our names?
Would they know all there is
to these childish games?
My head's such a mess;
You're all that it knows,
with rhymes and no reason;
Like a thorn on a rose.
My mind screams,Let him go!
but my heart knows me better;
Like a magnet attracted,
or a never-sent letter.
So tell me, old lover,
if the sky fell today,
would you think of me?
Or would you're thoughts go astray?

Copyright © sexypantz ... [ 2009-02-16 01:27:45]
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Re: The sky is falling. (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Monday, 16th February 2009 @ 07:52:01 AM AEST
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one of my favorite things is a questioning write. it engages the reader & gives an
opportunity for involvement in the meaning of the words. nicely done. peace. elle

Re: The sky is falling. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 16th February 2009 @ 10:20:15 AM AEST
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like it very much
keep up
cheers

Re: The sky is falling. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 16th February 2009 @ 05:09:50 PM AEST
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good write, good imagery and imagination.

-phil

Re: The sky is falling. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 17th February 2009 @ 12:43:16 AM AEST
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Darn it, Elle stole my thunder. ;-) Okay, I'll add that I really like the analogies and metaphors.

Take care,

Tim

Re: The sky is falling. (User Rating: 1 )
by ItsMeNow on Wednesday, 18th February 2009 @ 12:59:59 PM AEST
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I like it a lot. It is similar in style to some of my own pieces. The ending is strong and my favorite part of this poem. Well written.

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