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Someone with love so true.
Someone that would give you anything, do anything just for you.
But you don’t see it. Not one bit.
I’m just a friend that’s all I’m going to be to you.
Oh! How I want you, to open your eyes.
To see the heart I’m handing to you.
To see what true smiles I share with you.
To realize that I love you.
But I can’t do anything to help you out.
Just be hidden in the shadows.
Until the sun hits me to shine.
But until that I’ll be here.
Listening to you talk about how much you love her.
How much you miss her, and want her, need her back in your life.
I’ll be the one you’ll cry on.
The one that will always be there for you.
The one friend that will always have open arms for you.
To hear, to hold tight and never let you go.
Even when you don’t know.
That it kills me inside.
How much you love her.
How much you need her.
Oh! How I wish I was that girl you need.
The girl you would love.
But I’m just a friend to you.
Just waiting in the shadows until you open your eyes and see.

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Waiting In The Shadows, Until The Sun Hits Me To Shine

Contributed by Fireheart on Friday, 27th February 2009 @ 12:21:04 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

You can’t see what’s in front of you.
Someone with love so true.
Someone that would give you anything, do anything just for you.
But you don’t see it. Not one bit.
I’m just a friend that’s all I’m going to be to you.
Oh! How I want you, to open your eyes.
To see the heart I’m handing to you.
To see what true smiles I share with you.
To realize that I love you.
But I can’t do anything to help you out.
Just be hidden in the shadows.
Until the sun hits me to shine.
But until that I’ll be here.
Listening to you talk about how much you love her.
How much you miss her, and want her, need her back in your life.
I’ll be the one you’ll cry on.
The one that will always be there for you.
The one friend that will always have open arms for you.
To hear, to hold tight and never let you go.
Even when you don’t know.
That it kills me inside.
How much you love her.
How much you need her.
Oh! How I wish I was that girl you need.
The girl you would love.
But I’m just a friend to you.
Just waiting in the shadows until you open your eyes and see.

Copyright Â© Fireheart ... [ 2009-02-27 00:21:04]
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Re: Waiting In The Shadows, Until The Sun Hits Me To Shine (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 27th February 2009 @ 06:04:52 AM AEST
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Ahhh ..Unrequited love..this sucks.... not the poem but the situation.... The poem was wonderfully written. .. Hope the eyes open soon....
Welcome to YPDC....hope to see more from you..
Jenni

Re: Waiting In The Shadows, Until The Sun Hits Me To Shine (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Friday, 27th February 2009 @ 05:47:43 PM AEST
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I agree..Terrible situation...but awsome write.
welcome! I'm looking forward to reading more from you.

Re: Waiting In The Shadows, Until The Sun Hits Me To Shine (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 11th March 2009 @ 01:11:46 PM AEST
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Jenni puts it well, you have a wonderful piece here filled with strong emotion and sentiment.

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