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symptoms of tomorrows non-existence
sparrows running amuck in the fields that were called home
singing empty songs of yesterdays past

We play this field song like tribal drums in the mist
swallowing everything but the dust
sensing tomorrows dream but feeling the empty sense of it all
songs of yesteryear playing on the top forty
wanting dance and the sense of jive

staying is the best of this worse condition
slumber in the mist we call fate
wallow with the pigs but do not get slaughtered
those pearls will not get stuck in those throats
we all whimper on the aftertaste

Forget the taste and follow along
seeking the gold that we can all drive on
longing for mansions and the coolest faze
wondering tomorrow if we can handle the haze
dancing with demons and the way of the west
not the six guns but the pimped out cool vests
sipping the song that will never play
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Longing for days that have already been played

Contributed by lostrelic on Friday, 13th March 2009 @ 03:45:13 AM in AEST
Topic: abstract

Copy paste and decode
symptoms of tomorrows non-existence
sparrows running amuck in the fields that were called home
singing empty songs of yesterdays past

We play this field song like tribal drums in the mist
swallowing everything but the dust
sensing tomorrows dream but feeling the empty sense of it all
songs of yesteryear playing on the top forty
wanting dance and the sense of jive

staying is the best of this worse condition
slumber in the mist we call fate
wallow with the pigs but do not get slaughtered
those pearls will not get stuck in those throats
we all whimper on the aftertaste

Forget the taste and follow along
seeking the gold that we can all drive on
longing for mansions and the coolest faze
wondering tomorrow if we can handle the haze
dancing with demons and the way of the west
not the six guns but the pimped out cool vests
sipping the song that will never play
longing for days that have already been played

Copyright © lostrelic ... [ 2009-03-13 03:45:13]
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Re: Longing for days that have already been played (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 13th March 2009 @ 08:51:39 AM AEST
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beautiful. the imagery was great and it was written well. great work.

-phil

Re: Longing for days that have already been played (User Rating: 1 )
by simsalabim on Friday, 13th March 2009 @ 08:26:34 PM AEST
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i like porn also...and lil jon...

heh

Re: Longing for days that have already been played (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 14th March 2009 @ 01:22:21 AM AEST
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wwo my friend,
don't know what brought this on but ya gotta feel better. This is some very powerful writing.
Huggs, blessings,
emy

Re: Longing for days that have already been played (User Rating: 1 )
by ScorpionFire88 on Monday, 16th March 2009 @ 02:26:59 PM AEST
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I love the writing. Very deep and full of SOOO much power.

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