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[bodytext] => As i travelled down the track i sensed somthing wasn`t right i`ve travelled down this track before but never travelled at night with my lamp swinging by my side and the breeze swirling all around somthing made me stop and listen for a sound as the silence made me uneasy and the rain began to fall i convinced myself to carry on there was no one here at all stomping through the mud then out into the clearing somthing made me stop again was there somthing wrong with my hearing? i looked over my shoulder to nothing i could see my lamp was going flat oh lord i think this is the end of me standing in the dark with nowhere to go i looked up to the sky im gunna die oh god no one will ever know:( with a SNAP and a CRACK from a noise that was so frightening i leaped and bolted like a cheetah faster than grease lightening dodging, weaving, fending and hurtling over leaves i finally took a dive and landed behind a fallen tree there i stayed as quiet as a mouse wondering what on earth i should do? i wish i was at home in my nice warm house then somthing occured to me and i said stop being a sook your a bloody man not a bloody rabbit now get up and have a bloody look!! i stood up as noble and as gallant as a knight ready to face my opponent and accept my fate right here, right now, this time tonight ok im ready who ever the hell you are i know kung fu and im gunna kick your little arse so come out i know your behind that tree come out and accept your fate! OMG it`s a bloody fairy baffled and confused i said fairy you a long way from home what are you doing out here and why are you all alone? she floated down to where i was the rain had soaked her hair there we stood face to face looks like we both had a bit of a scare:( she said sir i`m lost, i think i have overflown now im stuck out here lost in the unknown please help me find my way and i`ll grant your wish come true lead me to where the clouds meet the earth and i swear to god i`ll see it through the words in her voice to me were crystal clear there was somthing nasty happening tonight and i`ve got to get her out of here! by now the rain had stopped and the sky was warmly fair the elligant fairy began to glow as well as her elligant hair of all my experiences through the bush here tonight i`ve never seen anything so beautiful or that could produce so much light the wind was now soft and it was time for us to leave never could i have imagined this and no one will ever believe i walked her through the bush while she glided by my side i was a man who was struck by love right now i could have died gliding over the hills, through the meadows and streams so far occasionly catching a glimps of a lovely shooting star the land around me was changing and the lush vegitation was flora rainbows and waterfalls flowed on gently beneth an amazing aurora we stopped at a creek and i took her by the hand i walked her across to the otherside where her feet could touch the sand my lady it`s been an honour to be your guide you`ve opened my eyes to a whole knew world i`m at peace here i feel so alive with a tear in her eye she asked me to stay but i promised her deeply that i would come back again one day come back and see me soon you and your spouse your welcome here anytime to my little tree house:) [comments] => 0 [counter] => 384 [topic] => 40 [informant] => shanat [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => fantasy )
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