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Array ( [sid] => 148844 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lost [time] => 2009-03-31 20:02:40 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Where am I
Its too dark,
I cant see
Where im going

Who am I
Im so confused,
So blind now
I cant remember

What do I do
Why do I do it,
What do I really want
How am I sure

Faith is lost, for I half believe
Hope is lost, for im half sure
Patience is lost, for I can half wait
Truth is lost, for I can half trust

Im home
Where theres light,
Where your special someone
Whose always thinking of you

I am
What I like to do,
and I love
What I cherish the most

I listen to my heart
To find and answer
For all of my questions
Until then, im sure [comments] => 2 [counter] => 232 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Wulfenix [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Lost

Contributed by Wulfenix on Tuesday, 31st March 2009 @ 08:02:40 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Where am I
Its too dark,
I cant see
Where im going

Who am I
Im so confused,
So blind now
I cant remember

What do I do
Why do I do it,
What do I really want
How am I sure

Faith is lost, for I half believe
Hope is lost, for im half sure
Patience is lost, for I can half wait
Truth is lost, for I can half trust

Im home
Where theres light,
Where your special someone
Whose always thinking of you

I am
What I like to do,
and I love
What I cherish the most

I listen to my heart
To find and answer
For all of my questions
Until then, im sure

Copyright © Wulfenix ... [ 2009-03-31 20:02:40]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 31st March 2009 @ 08:23:10 PM AEST
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Apostrophes are your friends. The second stanza feels clumsy, and not in a thematic way. I like the fourth stanza though, with half believing and so on, and it works well as a turning point for the poem. "I love | What I cherish the most" sounds a bit redundant. The last stanza finished fairly well, although the last line seemed a bit ambiguous as to what you were sure OF (that might just be my interpretation though). Good effort overall.

Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 1st April 2009 @ 12:11:44 PM AEST
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very nice, it flowed well and you conveyed the feeling of anxiety and confusion perfectly. great work.

-phil

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