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And people want you to say
What’s wrong with you
I can’t make words to tell them what I’m going through.

I just can’t seem to tell you why
Why I sit here and cry
I don’t know if I’m just sad
Or if I’m going mad

Lately I just can’t tell
All I know nothing seems real but life is hell
One real thing stands out and that’s time
It goes by so slow in my mind

Slowly driving me insane
But it brings me to reality
To take away the pain
So that I don’t have to face with the morality

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Everything's a Lie

Contributed by Voice of the Silent on Thursday, 2nd April 2009 @ 07:08:13 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



When you’ve had a bad day
And people want you to say
What’s wrong with you
I can’t make words to tell them what I’m going through.

I just can’t seem to tell you why
Why I sit here and cry
I don’t know if I’m just sad
Or if I’m going mad

Lately I just can’t tell
All I know nothing seems real but life is hell
One real thing stands out and that’s time
It goes by so slow in my mind

Slowly driving me insane
But it brings me to reality
To take away the pain
So that I don’t have to face with the morality

That everything is a lie




Copyright © Voice of the Silent ... [ 2009-04-02 19:08:13]
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Re: Everything's a Lie (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 2nd April 2009 @ 08:56:00 PM AEST
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It's sad but it has your pazaz.
Great writing.
huggs, blessings, hope,
emy


Re: Everything's a Lie (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Thursday, 2nd April 2009 @ 09:49:47 PM AEST
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Emotional torture
always
knocks us down...


Re: Everything's a Lie (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 3rd April 2009 @ 05:51:17 PM AEST
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great writing, i think many people could relate to this.

-phil


Re: Everything's a Lie (User Rating: 1 )
by 12161216 on Saturday, 4th April 2009 @ 01:09:15 PM AEST
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A little dull in the flow, but overall good. I can relate to you, and the emotions can be felt.


Re: Everything's a Lie (User Rating: 1 )
by keikori on Tuesday, 7th April 2009 @ 04:01:57 PM AEST
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reality strikes hard..everything IS a lie, well done, you have a good mind, and great writing




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