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Array ( [sid] => 149021 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ~Dark lovers Unite~ [time] => 2009-04-09 18:04:31 [hometext] => we are back........ cowrite ingeniousidiot and shelby [bodytext] => Gently washing eyes of stone

Coming to only to notice he’s all alone


Blackened markers standing above raised mounds of soil

Painful reminders of an earthly toil


Guarding angel over charred remains

Of eternal screams and crimson stains


The lonely bell tolls from over the hill

Her heart it pains her and she loves him still.

Heart of stone and all alone

Eternal damnation from where she roams.

an angel of dark she may be

blood red and lips of poison seethe


As scarlet eyes watch passions rise

Under a silvery moon and pitch stained skies

Erratic beats from straining heartstrings

Waiting for the climax and the rush with which it brings

Paled flesh the hue of the shining moon

To a mortal heart it makes him swoon


They danced beneath the opaque sky

Wind over the valley softly sighed.

The shadows swept them in,

love divine ,love of sin, twirling in the night.



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~Dark lovers Unite~

Contributed by shelby on Thursday, 9th April 2009 @ 06:04:31 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Gently washing eyes of stone

Coming to only to notice he’s all alone


Blackened markers standing above raised mounds of soil

Painful reminders of an earthly toil


Guarding angel over charred remains

Of eternal screams and crimson stains


The lonely bell tolls from over the hill

Her heart it pains her and she loves him still.

Heart of stone and all alone

Eternal damnation from where she roams.

an angel of dark she may be

blood red and lips of poison seethe


As scarlet eyes watch passions rise

Under a silvery moon and pitch stained skies

Erratic beats from straining heartstrings

Waiting for the climax and the rush with which it brings

Paled flesh the hue of the shining moon

To a mortal heart it makes him swoon


They danced beneath the opaque sky

Wind over the valley softly sighed.

The shadows swept them in,

love divine ,love of sin, twirling in the night.







Copyright © shelby ... [ 2009-04-09 18:04:31]
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Re: ~Dark lovers Unite~ (User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on Thursday, 9th April 2009 @ 08:57:46 PM AEST
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I see you added one more stanza...it turned out very good. I like the title too...it fits very nicely.
Maybe more poems will come, only time will tell...
Thank you once again my friend.

Rich


Re: ~Dark lovers Unite~ (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 9th April 2009 @ 09:11:34 PM AEST
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Rich thank you also for doing this with me. We better do more damn it lol! I forgot to ask you about title so I am glad you liked it.

Hugs
Michelle


Re: ~Dark lovers Unite~ (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 9th April 2009 @ 10:54:20 PM AEST
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"Wind over the valley softly sighed" "love divine ,love of sin, ."
Dear Michelle, I am also softly sighing after reading this dark lover's poem..
I don't say it is a sin..Let them unite happily.
hugs..
venkat




Re: ~Dark lovers Unite~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 10th April 2009 @ 07:35:41 PM AEST
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a beautifully dark write. it flowed so wonderfully, a real joy to read.

-Phil


Re: ~Dark lovers Unite~ (User Rating: 1 )
by thezenmonkey on Wednesday, 22nd April 2009 @ 05:11:47 AM AEST
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The best and most original stylish poem about love/lovers I have ever read! I like the way your mind works. You are a poetic genius!




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