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A Year In Haiku
Contributed by
windowguy
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Monday, 13th April 2009 @ 01:20:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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JANUARY
Delightful display
Of snowdrops bowing white heads
To the suns glory.
FEBRUARY
Green buds now appear
Indicating spring will soon
Energise us all.
MARCH
Lambs gambol in fields
Frisky with the joys of life
Bleating happily.
APRIL
Bluebells standing proud
Beneath trees now sparsely dressed
With freshest green leaves.
MAY
Much awaited sound
Echoes through forest and copse -
Cuckoos arrival.
JUNE
Parks and gardens burst
With sounds and vibrant colours
Perfect harmony.
JULY
Beaches become full
Of families having fun
In sand and big waves.
AUGUST
Ripe golden harvest
Burning sun in azure skies
Labours rewarded.
SEPTEMBER
Swallows congregate
On telephone wires ready
To migrate down south.
OCTOBER
Red and gold leaves fall,
Crunchy as cornflakes beneath
Feet on a crisp morn.
NOVEMBER
Frosty webs sparkle
In the early morning sun
Brightly bejewelled.
DECEMBER
First few flakes of snow
Dust gardens like icing on
A chocolate cake.
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windowguy
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2009-04-13 01:20:35]
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Re: A Year In Haiku
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by Voice of the Silent on
Monday, 13th April 2009 @ 01:31:57 AM AEST
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Honestly I like november from what you've wrote
but I commend your skill for haiku (which until now I've been spelling it wrong lol)
but great write I ask how long did it take you to put this together?
hope to read more soon
-kelly |
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Re: A Year In Haiku
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by windowguy on
Monday, 13th April 2009 @ 02:41:58 AM AEST
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It didn't take as long to write as you may think.
About an hour. Only been writing Haikus for about a year, but find it a favourite form of poetry.
I regard them as snapshops of life, kind of 'photographs' of what I feel at that moment...There will be more to follow.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
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Re: A Year In Haiku
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by elle on
Monday, 13th April 2009 @ 06:16:36 AM AEST
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| this is splendid. I love Haiku & I love this.seasonal rendition. . . peace. elle |
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Re: A Year In Haiku
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 13th April 2009 @ 06:43:15 PM AEST
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WOW!! and then WOW again.... This is great haiku. Well done. I wish I had thought of this..
Keep up the great work.
Jenni |
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Re: A Year In Haiku
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by zenith66 on
Tuesday, 14th April 2009 @ 09:28:11 AM AEST
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hey just want to say thanks for your comment on one of my poems and also to say damn you lol, for something up with this poem. what a great idea to capture each season in a sort of mega haiku,
in fact its such a great idea that i feel i will just have to do my own, a great write here with each month easily imagined and just as fondly remembered,
keep it up!! |
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Re: A Year In Haiku
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by Lilymaemax on
Sunday, 3rd May 2009 @ 11:57:31 AM AEST
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| Just loved this I find the seasons fascinating and you,ve captured a bit of all of them.Lilymae |
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