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dusks last breath
wondering aimlessly
still finding the way.

Gathering each emotion
like tiny pebbles
to toss around
another day.

One's reasoning
is just their own.
Not our law
set in hard stone.

Tattered and weathered
wings on mend
tending to thoughts
bending in dreams.

How far does it go?
Where does it end?
Entwined in trust
good deed in friend.

Slipping at times
beyond last shimmers
of twilight's gaze
we dance on calico winds.

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Standard

Contributed by shelby on Friday, 17th April 2009 @ 07:09:06 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

"Our search"
dusks last breath
wondering aimlessly
still finding the way.

Gathering each emotion
like tiny pebbles
to toss around
another day.

One's reasoning
is just their own.
Not our law
set in hard stone.

Tattered and weathered
wings on mend
tending to thoughts
bending in dreams.

How far does it go?
Where does it end?
Entwined in trust
good deed in friend.

Slipping at times
beyond last shimmers
of twilight's gaze
we dance on calico winds.

Photobucket

Copyright © shelby ... [ 2009-04-17 19:09:06]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Standard (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 17th April 2009 @ 08:58:51 PM AEST
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"One's reasoning is just their own.
Not our law set in hard stone....
I caught this line..so true..remaining..O.K.
..busy for few days ... I will come back..
hugs n love :-)venkat

Re: Standard (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 17th April 2009 @ 09:11:36 PM AEST
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Old or new it's great writing.
Huggs, blessings,
emy

Re: Standard (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Friday, 17th April 2009 @ 10:22:00 PM AEST
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bending in dreams ... yes that is what one does ... until so many dreams have broken that we become still and un-yielding. Beautiful write ..

Re: Standard (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 19th April 2009 @ 12:37:53 PM AEST
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Shell, this is such a beautiful verse. Beautiful verse and beautiful photo.
This has an airy kind of feeling to it. It breathes with a softness that
could sustain a dying air. Exceptionally delicate.

Lovely post, hun.

~ Breezy

Re: Standard (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 21st April 2009 @ 12:38:26 PM AEST
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"we dance on calico winds."

What a great to line to wrap this up with!
Wonderful.

Re: Standard (User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on Wednesday, 22nd April 2009 @ 09:14:40 AM AEST
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yet another beautiful and wonderful piece from you my friend. It kinda fits to the way that we wish we could see things under the current set of circumstances that plague us all. Great job and wonderfully written.

Rich

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