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Array ( [sid] => 149671 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Every now and then [time] => 2009-05-05 18:35:42 [hometext] => I wanted to make a unique poem for my first try in writing poetry. Did I succeed? [bodytext] => Every now and then, crying little babies cease to exist, in spite of this we ask, “Where art though babies of the universe?”
Death takes them not. Fate takes them not. Nevertheless, what of Destiny?
Looking up I see the universe, and all the wishing stars. Then I see the blue moon frowning. I ask the moon, “Why frown moon? You light the world at night! Surely, yee would be happy with such a gift.” then the frowning moon replies, “I frown because I never see the light! Therefore, I’m so cold. Not like my brother Sun.”
Then I turn to the mischievous Sun, right then I see his wife Earth, and see I soon Moon will get his dream! Then I see the babies of the universe clinging to their mother Earth. And I say, “YES! Destiny takes care of all. For the babies shall return at the precise time. Just have hope!”
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Every now and then

Contributed by JKRoser on Tuesday, 5th May 2009 @ 06:35:42 PM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous



Every now and then, crying little babies cease to exist, in spite of this we ask, “Where art though babies of the universe?”
Death takes them not. Fate takes them not. Nevertheless, what of Destiny?
Looking up I see the universe, and all the wishing stars. Then I see the blue moon frowning. I ask the moon, “Why frown moon? You light the world at night! Surely, yee would be happy with such a gift.” then the frowning moon replies, “I frown because I never see the light! Therefore, I’m so cold. Not like my brother Sun.”
Then I turn to the mischievous Sun, right then I see his wife Earth, and see I soon Moon will get his dream! Then I see the babies of the universe clinging to their mother Earth. And I say, “YES! Destiny takes care of all. For the babies shall return at the precise time. Just have hope!”




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Re: Every now and then (User Rating: 1 )
by vampyrekiss on Tuesday, 5th May 2009 @ 09:54:29 PM AEST
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I liked it. good word choice vivid imagery,

cant wait to read more


Re: Every now and then (User Rating: 1 )
by JKRoser on Tuesday, 5th May 2009 @ 11:39:01 PM AEST
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I messed up on a few things in it though. :( Thanks for your comment though!

Jennifer




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