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[aid] => mick
[title] => my Journey to nirvana...
[time] => 2009-05-05 22:51:49
[hometext] => i really hope you like it am tring to start writing so please leave constuctive criticism ..
[bodytext] => Fix the world Fix this life With each swig of the bottle. I am closer to reaching nirvana.. I close my eyes and wish for it all to go way While I try to erase all this pain with each miraculous drank from my magic bottle.. I scream up to heaven above .. But know one can hear this desperate young girls cries of contempt The smell on my breath , the sweat in my hair , and the dazed look in my eyes.. Only lets me know I'm one more drank away from feeling nothing…. I know I am being judged by the world But hell I go through this everyday.. Cant the world leave me and my friend jack danelles alone, As I get closer to the bottom I succeed in drowning this pain But gaining the label of a drunk I cant go on living this way nothing is ever going to change … So up my bottle goes with its secret potion inside, for only me to know but this ignorance I gain from the contents inside.. is everything I need and I will never let it go b/c this is my only escort in life And when am alone and blue my friend is only few dollars away.. So I close my eyes and take another swig of my own self remedy for life.. Alcohol [comments] => 1 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 75 [informant] => jmt25607 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )
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