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[sid] => 14972
[catid] => 1
[aid] => Mick
[title] => Just Leave
[time] => 2003-03-26 21:45:00
[hometext] => I wrote this when I was angry with a supposed friend.
[bodytext] => Yeah, I see that look on your face
You said you'd understand
But now it's clear
You never understood
I don't believe you ever cared to.
My head is about to explode-
Go ahead and leave
Because I finally see
That I'm better off alone.
There's a fire in my soul
The flames are raging
And that heartless stare
Is plenty of fuel
To feed my fury.
We'll be better off
If you keep quiet
Because I can't take anymore
I've lived my life
A prisoner to this cruel society
I'd rather spend the rest in solitude.
My head's about to explode-
Go ahead and leave.
[comments] => 13
[counter] => 299
[topic] => 6
[informant] => karoody
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 10
[ratings] => 2
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => AngryPoetry
)
Just Leave
Contributed by
karoody
on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 09:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Yeah, I see that look on your face
You said you'd understand
But now it's clear
You never understood
I don't believe you ever cared to.
My head is about to explode-
Go ahead and leave
Because I finally see
That I'm better off alone.
There's a fire in my soul
The flames are raging
And that heartless stare
Is plenty of fuel
To feed my fury.
We'll be better off
If you keep quiet
Because I can't take anymore
I've lived my life
A prisoner to this cruel society
I'd rather spend the rest in solitude.
My head's about to explode-
Go ahead and leave.
Copyright ©
karoody
... [
2003-03-26 21:45:00]
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Re: Just Leave
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by roisin on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 10:10:43 PM AEST
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This is the very poem I needed to read tonight when I had thoughts of picking up the phone, and re-starting an ill fated relationship... .thank you Kara..
rosie |
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Re: Just Leave
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by knowWhat_kind on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 11:01:26 PM AEST
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| I'm sorry about your friendship that was a good poem though |
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Re: Just Leave
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by Kane on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 11:37:47 PM AEST
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Let it out my sweet child, allow the emotion to speak for you, very strong, fore I enjoyed it.
Kane |
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Re: Just Leave
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by venkat on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 12:22:18 AM AEST
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| My dear Kara, I agree with the comment of kane. it is a powerful write. Excellently written. breath taking to general reader. the repetition of '"my head is about to explode-"in last but one line seems unnecessary it slightly dilutes the effect of poem. hope that you wre freed from suchpainful thoughts. hugs ,smile please..venkat |
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Re: Just Leave
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 12:59:02 AM AEST
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| I know these feelings well ... this is a great write about anger. |
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Re: Just Leave
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by The_Phantom on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 01:27:42 AM AEST
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Outstanding write, very emotional. I enjoyed this poem.
The Phantom |
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Re: Just Leave
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by Apartment213 on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 04:19:03 AM AEST
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| wow kara that was great, but very angry i hope ur okay |
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Re: Just Leave
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 05:45:57 AM AEST
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Kara, what a sad write..I hope all is well with you. You have written of your anger really well..
Hugs,
Jenni |
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Re: Just Leave
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by Wilder on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 06:09:28 AM AEST
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| A sad poem but also a good one. |
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Re: Just Leave
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by Wrybod on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 11:22:46 AM AEST
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| Kara, Been there......... got told just like that...... deserved it .......long time ago.......brings it all back........vividly |
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Re: Just Leave
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 11:57:22 AM AEST
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| awww, kara, big hugs and love to you, always nessa |
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Re: Just Leave
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by shelby on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 01:53:38 PM AEST
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Kara,well done. I know what you feel!! I disolved over 90% of my past relationships. When hard times come and you need your friends you find out sadly what their made of. I told them to just leave also. Thanks for sharing. You will find people who are true to you durning the good and the bad.Thats the blessing of a true friend!!
Michelle |
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Re: Just Leave
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by LadyDama on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 03:24:37 PM AEST
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| simple and to the point... excellent delivery... you, too, write with pain and passion... blessings, my friend... michele |
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