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Array ( [sid] => 149759 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => you never knew (stop drop and roll) [time] => 2009-05-08 21:26:03 [hometext] => welcome to my world.....enjoy it while it lasts Etards [bodytext] =>
so you can't get enough (of what i tried to hide)

and you still insist

what you don't know



i'm so far above the ones i hated

the greedy, the stupid, the lost



now that i'm the victim

as true death should be....



so far above you

every word you say is useless

and now...

you know how....

incomplete

you are

so...

fall down flat

on your mistakes

point at me

laugh at me

make up lies

about me

blame me

for being me...



more mistakes

one after another

and another

and another

another and

another



yet i'm the one who falls

for all of your intrusive, arrogant mistakes


with nothing solid to hold onto...


you may think so

(can't stop you)

but i know better


and one day you'll see how


i only wanted to

thank you


for freeing me

(for finding me)

step by cultivated step

indirectly, ignorantly

the same way


that it has taken your soul


you can't hold power over someone

who knows more than you



so...burn

in jealousy and confusion


and leave me


the hell alone...











[comments] => 1 [counter] => 319 [topic] => 6 [informant] => simsalabim [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
you never knew (stop drop and roll)

Contributed by simsalabim on Friday, 8th May 2009 @ 09:26:03 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry




so you can't get enough (of what i tried to hide)

and you still insist

what you don't know



i'm so far above the ones i hated

the greedy, the stupid, the lost



now that i'm the victim

as true death should be....



so far above you

every word you say is useless

and now...

you know how....

incomplete

you are

so...

fall down flat

on your mistakes

point at me

laugh at me

make up lies

about me

blame me

for being me...



more mistakes

one after another

and another

and another

another and

another



yet i'm the one who falls

for all of your intrusive, arrogant mistakes


with nothing solid to hold onto...


you may think so

(can't stop you)

but i know better


and one day you'll see how


i only wanted to

thank you


for freeing me

(for finding me)

step by cultivated step

indirectly, ignorantly

the same way


that it has taken your soul


you can't hold power over someone

who knows more than you



so...burn

in jealousy and confusion


and leave me


the hell alone...















Copyright © simsalabim ... [ 2009-05-08 21:26:03]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: you never knew (stop drop and roll) (User Rating: 1 )
by musicrox13 on Saturday, 9th May 2009 @ 09:05:36 AM AEST
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i luv ur poem sometimes i feel the same way




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