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Array ( [sid] => 149811 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The love I left behind [time] => 2009-05-11 15:01:12 [hometext] => Freestyle love poem [bodytext] =>

Sweetheart, I just want to let you know.
I am reminded of you where ever I go.
I constantly think of my love I left behind.
Memories of you are always on my mind.

Often I think of the marvelous joy.
That comes the moment I open home’s front door.
I imagine the excitement of seeing you again.
The wonderful joy returning home to you will bring.

I dream of tenderly holding hands with you.
I can almost hear that funny laugh that you do,
Every time you see something funny on TV,
While sitting on the couch watching a movie.

I wish that I could be right there somehow.
I crave to hold you in my arms right now.
I desire to express my deep love for you.
I need to hear you say, ‘Honey I love you, too.’

Memories of you always linger on my mind.
I yearn for my precious love I left behind.
Sweetheart, sometimes it is hard for me to wait,
Upon the day I get to come home to my soul mate.


Copyright 2008 [comments] => 1 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 24 [informant] => Nabahood23 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
The love I left behind

Contributed by Nabahood23 on Monday, 11th May 2009 @ 03:01:12 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered




Sweetheart, I just want to let you know.
I am reminded of you where ever I go.
I constantly think of my love I left behind.
Memories of you are always on my mind.

Often I think of the marvelous joy.
That comes the moment I open home’s front door.
I imagine the excitement of seeing you again.
The wonderful joy returning home to you will bring.

I dream of tenderly holding hands with you.
I can almost hear that funny laugh that you do,
Every time you see something funny on TV,
While sitting on the couch watching a movie.

I wish that I could be right there somehow.
I crave to hold you in my arms right now.
I desire to express my deep love for you.
I need to hear you say, ‘Honey I love you, too.’

Memories of you always linger on my mind.
I yearn for my precious love I left behind.
Sweetheart, sometimes it is hard for me to wait,
Upon the day I get to come home to my soul mate.


Copyright 2008




Copyright © Nabahood23 ... [ 2009-05-11 15:01:12]
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Re: The love I left behind (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 12th May 2009 @ 06:30:59 AM AEST
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maybe needed some more commas in certain places to assist fluency, but a good effort.

-Phil




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