Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	02-June 11:15:51 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 149960 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Any idea what you've done? [time] => 2009-05-17 22:30:55 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Any idea what you've done?
You can't even understand what you've begun
Fear what you've set in motion
You're going to cause a spill of raw emotion

I'm sorry but I have to tell
Before you damn us to hell
You can't let this go through
It will cause harm even to you

You wanted to help us all
But all you’re doing is setting humanity up to fall
Stop now while you have to chance
I beg you don't advance

You're going to trouble the land
And you're going to force my hand
I will stop you
From what you're about to do [comments] => 3 [counter] => 250 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Voice of the Silent [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Any idea what you've done?

Contributed by Voice of the Silent on Sunday, 17th May 2009 @ 10:30:55 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Any idea what you've done?
You can't even understand what you've begun
Fear what you've set in motion
You're going to cause a spill of raw emotion

I'm sorry but I have to tell
Before you damn us to hell
You can't let this go through
It will cause harm even to you

You wanted to help us all
But all you’re doing is setting humanity up to fall
Stop now while you have to chance
I beg you don't advance

You're going to trouble the land
And you're going to force my hand
I will stop you
From what you're about to do

Copyright Â© Voice of the Silent ... [ 2009-05-17 22:30:55]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Any idea what you've done? (User Rating: 1 )
by tothepoint on Sunday, 17th May 2009 @ 10:35:17 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

wow! someone done something but what. If i read this while doing housework or an activiity this poem would stop me haha.

i felt the halt and stop in this piece. great write short and breath taking.

Re: Any idea what you've done? (User Rating: 1 )
by theurbanpoet on Monday, 18th May 2009 @ 04:15:32 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Once again I am massively impressed kelly! It leaves you shouting at your screen "What has he done!".....Instead of going for the killer line at the end which alot of poets (including myself) usually do you have left us wanting more which is just as affective. Keep up the good work :)

Re: Any idea what you've done? (User Rating: 1 )
by Elipsis on Wednesday, 20th May 2009 @ 03:21:12 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

This was honestly a good piece of poetry! The rythm can be kept and it surely does make one wonder what this person is busy doing... I can feel the anxiety connected to the fact that you need to stop this person, but also the peace you provide with knowing that you will stop this person... Well written!

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. Â©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright Â© to their submitter. All the rest Copyright Â© 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com