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Naturally Naked
Contributed by
agyat
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Sunday, 24th May 2009 @ 02:25:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Me, a soul,
wandering in abstract,naked,
searching for a body,
of a "human",
My eyes could see,
a resort, to rest in,
and enjoy, the life,
with me in physical form,
wanted to get myself,
covered with clothes,
so as to hide my
nakedness,
I entered the body,
and felt relieved,
but, I could see,
people looking at me,
and laughing,
I discovered,
the body, I
moved into,
was naturally naked,
with clothes.
Copyright ©
agyat
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2009-05-24 02:25:50]
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Re: Naturally Naked
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th May 2009 @ 02:29:26 AM AEST
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Definitely thought provoking and I can see different perspectives on this. Nice job.
Tim
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Re: Naturally Naked
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by girish on
Sunday, 24th May 2009 @ 07:30:36 AM AEST
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| soul is never naked. do not enter a naked body. your soul has a mind that is naked. dress your mind and you are worn. |
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