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Array ( [sid] => 150158 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => realizations [time] => 2009-05-25 18:45:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => theres always something you hope is there,
but most of the time its not.
theres always someone who says they care,
but chances are they dont.
your plans can shatter in one minute,
with one action your life can break,
especially with me...
because the person i love is fake.
my life rested in your hands,
you broke my heart again and again.
i dont know why i trusted you,
at least now i know the truth.
its time to break free..
time to stop living for you and start living for me.
im dead inside, completely numb.
i cant believe i could be so dumb.
i really loved you, and i always will.
just somethings not right,
you cant imagine how i feel.
i wanted to be with you for life,
but you couldnt take care of me right.
the only thing you gave me was fright. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 151 [topic] => 22 [informant] => thesweetestsin65 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

realizations

Contributed by thesweetestsin65 on Monday, 25th May 2009 @ 06:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

theres always something you hope is there,
but most of the time its not.
theres always someone who says they care,
but chances are they dont.
your plans can shatter in one minute,
with one action your life can break,
especially with me...
because the person i love is fake.
my life rested in your hands,
you broke my heart again and again.
i dont know why i trusted you,
at least now i know the truth.
its time to break free..
time to stop living for you and start living for me.
im dead inside, completely numb.
i cant believe i could be so dumb.
i really loved you, and i always will.
just somethings not right,
you cant imagine how i feel.
i wanted to be with you for life,
but you couldnt take care of me right.
the only thing you gave me was fright.

Copyright © thesweetestsin65 ... [ 2009-05-25 18:45:00]
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Re: realizations (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 25th May 2009 @ 08:01:42 PM AEST
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sad but another good write.
blessing,
emy

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