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Array ( [sid] => 150416 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The last goodbye [time] => 2009-06-02 22:55:45 [hometext] => [bodytext] => First there was you
then we added me
two friends we soon
ended up to be

We shared our joys
and tears unrestrained
and together formed
a bond sustained.

Sustained by trust
sustained by love
sustained by you
sustained by me.

Years passed
yet we continued on
and each moment
was a lyrical song

A song of life
a song of sorrow
a song of night
a song of our tomorrows.

Now all is not the same
you are gone
I remain
the us, the we
has turned to dust
I'm left alone
no one to trust.

When we said
it would be forever
and old age would
find us sitting still,
I believed it this time
even winds of change
would not seperate
the two of us.

So I sit all broken hearted
the reality has finally set in.
It is not you and me and us
Just another void
and silenced last goodbye.

maybe the best of friends we never really were.............................. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 43 [informant] => shelby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
The last goodbye

Contributed by shelby on Tuesday, 2nd June 2009 @ 10:55:45 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



First there was you
then we added me
two friends we soon
ended up to be

We shared our joys
and tears unrestrained
and together formed
a bond sustained.

Sustained by trust
sustained by love
sustained by you
sustained by me.

Years passed
yet we continued on
and each moment
was a lyrical song

A song of life
a song of sorrow
a song of night
a song of our tomorrows.

Now all is not the same
you are gone
I remain
the us, the we
has turned to dust
I'm left alone
no one to trust.

When we said
it would be forever
and old age would
find us sitting still,
I believed it this time
even winds of change
would not seperate
the two of us.

So I sit all broken hearted
the reality has finally set in.
It is not you and me and us
Just another void
and silenced last goodbye.

maybe the best of friends we never really were..............................




Copyright © shelby ... [ 2009-06-02 22:55:45]
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Re: The last goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 2nd June 2009 @ 11:06:47 PM AEST
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Sad but true. I was just discussing tonight with a good friend how people let us down all the time. :-(

I'll pm you the rest.

Tim


Re: The last goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 3rd June 2009 @ 09:09:05 PM AEST
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Very simply put, Michelle...but oh so deep....
I hope you are doing well....
Hugs
Jenni


Re: The last goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 4th June 2009 @ 10:33:39 AM AEST
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Oh me, girl,
I kindda thought this was what was going on with you but didn't want to pry into your buisiness..
Great writing as always.
It's really sad that you're going thru this. My heart goes out to you. I know how hard it is when something like this happens.
I'm always here for you my dear shell.
Hang tuff and go forward. One never knows what's just around the corner.
Holler any time ya need an ear.
Luv you gal, huggs, blessings, healing, peace, joy,
emy




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