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Array ( [sid] => 150613 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dreaming Stars [time] => 2009-06-09 21:38:48 [hometext] => I wrote this not to long ago for a girl i love with all my heart.((I am also a girl, deal with it.)) it was the third poem i ever wrote. I just started writeing poetry resently and I am 14 so please be gental <3 [bodytext] => Every night i lay in bed,
looking up at the ceiling,
but in truth all i see is you,
and i wonder,
does she see those stars,
The place where we can stay together,
no longer needing to hide from who we are,
but I know that all is just a dream created by my braking heart.

does she see those stars,
those beautiful stars where we dance in an endless sea.
as i lay my head back to dream,
i dream of you,
you and me,
finally alone in those endless stars.
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Dreaming Stars

Contributed by Everlasting_Flame on Tuesday, 9th June 2009 @ 09:38:48 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

Every night i lay in bed,
looking up at the ceiling,
but in truth all i see is you,
and i wonder,
does she see those stars,
The place where we can stay together,
no longer needing to hide from who we are,
but I know that all is just a dream created by my braking heart.

does she see those stars,
those beautiful stars where we dance in an endless sea.
as i lay my head back to dream,
i dream of you,
you and me,
finally alone in those endless stars.

Copyright © Everlasting_Flame ... [ 2009-06-09 21:38:48]
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Re: Dreaming Stars (User Rating: 1 )
by Inevitable on Tuesday, 9th June 2009 @ 09:45:13 PM AEST
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This was sweet.
It brings me back to when I was fourteen and first started dealing with heartache. I hope you feel better and sort through this.
Keep writing and best of luck!

Re: Dreaming Stars (User Rating: 1 )
by hopelezz on Tuesday, 9th June 2009 @ 09:46:22 PM AEST
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wow... beautiful love poem...

great...

hope you will dance your love in the endless stars..
just keep on believing..

- HopeLezZ

Re: Dreaming Stars (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Love4u on Wednesday, 10th June 2009 @ 12:45:54 AM AEST
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This is beautiful, really it is.
You can tell that it's come frome the heart and you mean every single word of it :)

Kepp on writing, your doing great

(^-^) Eternal_love4u

Re: Dreaming Stars (User Rating: 1 )
by mase on Thursday, 11th June 2009 @ 06:46:23 AM AEST
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I love this poem,
no construction or alteration, just pure thought and emotion! keep it up :)

Re: Dreaming Stars (User Rating: 1 )
by PreciousKitten on Thursday, 11th June 2009 @ 12:14:39 PM AEST
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this poem is sweet, touching, and awesome. i know how that feels. i love this poem. keep on writing.

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