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Array ( [sid] => 150764 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => God Please [time] => 2009-06-16 08:55:01 [hometext] => [bodytext] => God Save Us All...
Until The Day We Fall...
We'll Go With No Fight At All...
For I'm Ready And Willing To Fight For Freedom...
Not So Someone Could Stand Dominate And Tall ...
Our Country's So Trust Less...
This Fighting Is So Worthless...
I Wish Our Flag Could Fly Painless...
Too Many Tears, But Nobody Left To Help Here...
What The Hell Is Wrong With Us?...
Why Do We Need To Pray For Family To Come Home Because Of Those We Dont Trust?...
Men That Could Almost Be Kids...
Sent Off To Battle For Those We Want To Be Rid...
Too Bad Those Men Of Power Don't Know The Damage They Did...
They Say That We're Free But Then Why Won't They Listen?..
None Of Them Care, Even After They See The Pain Suffered By Each Person...
Battles Fought, Hundreds Have Been Killed...
These People We Call Leaders Say Others Were Taught...
When They Were Showed How Body Bags Were Filled...
God Bless America, Is That What They Believe?..
Why Would Our Lord Thank Us For Filling His Kingdom Because Of Differences we See?..
Men All Round The World Have Battle Scars...
Showing Them Off As If They Were Trophies Of Honor...
A Knife In The Arm...
A Bullet Just To Do More Harm...
One To The Chest...
And A Grenade Or Maybe A Bomb Just To Finish The Rest...
Is This Our Land Of The Free?..
Through All Of The Bloodshed Is That What They See?..
The Home Of The Brave?..
Those That Drop Bombs And Sneak Attacks, Just To Learn How To Save...
Many Families Have Cried...
Because The Time Said To Come Home Was A Lie...
Or Maybe Their Friend Was One Of Those To Die...
Our Leaders, Our Men Of Power, All They Say Is That For Our Country At least They Tried...
God Please, Hear Our Prayer-Hear Our Begging Call...
Give Us Release, Break These Damn Chains And Make Them Fall...
This Is The Bloody World We're Living In...
Told To Be Heaven Sent Soldiers, But Everyday They Commit This Sin...
Killing And Murder, Greed For Domination...
This Slaughter Of Fellow Man...
This Is The Hand Dealt To Our Generation...
Send Out A Re-Deal For The Next Hand In Our Nation...


[comments] => 3 [counter] => 199 [topic] => 41 [informant] => Dazedreamer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => political )
God Please

Contributed by Dazedreamer on Tuesday, 16th June 2009 @ 08:55:01 AM in AEST
Topic: political



God Save Us All...
Until The Day We Fall...
We'll Go With No Fight At All...
For I'm Ready And Willing To Fight For Freedom...
Not So Someone Could Stand Dominate And Tall ...
Our Country's So Trust Less...
This Fighting Is So Worthless...
I Wish Our Flag Could Fly Painless...
Too Many Tears, But Nobody Left To Help Here...
What The Hell Is Wrong With Us?...
Why Do We Need To Pray For Family To Come Home Because Of Those We Dont Trust?...
Men That Could Almost Be Kids...
Sent Off To Battle For Those We Want To Be Rid...
Too Bad Those Men Of Power Don't Know The Damage They Did...
They Say That We're Free But Then Why Won't They Listen?..
None Of Them Care, Even After They See The Pain Suffered By Each Person...
Battles Fought, Hundreds Have Been Killed...
These People We Call Leaders Say Others Were Taught...
When They Were Showed How Body Bags Were Filled...
God Bless America, Is That What They Believe?..
Why Would Our Lord Thank Us For Filling His Kingdom Because Of Differences we See?..
Men All Round The World Have Battle Scars...
Showing Them Off As If They Were Trophies Of Honor...
A Knife In The Arm...
A Bullet Just To Do More Harm...
One To The Chest...
And A Grenade Or Maybe A Bomb Just To Finish The Rest...
Is This Our Land Of The Free?..
Through All Of The Bloodshed Is That What They See?..
The Home Of The Brave?..
Those That Drop Bombs And Sneak Attacks, Just To Learn How To Save...
Many Families Have Cried...
Because The Time Said To Come Home Was A Lie...
Or Maybe Their Friend Was One Of Those To Die...
Our Leaders, Our Men Of Power, All They Say Is That For Our Country At least They Tried...
God Please, Hear Our Prayer-Hear Our Begging Call...
Give Us Release, Break These Damn Chains And Make Them Fall...
This Is The Bloody World We're Living In...
Told To Be Heaven Sent Soldiers, But Everyday They Commit This Sin...
Killing And Murder, Greed For Domination...
This Slaughter Of Fellow Man...
This Is The Hand Dealt To Our Generation...
Send Out A Re-Deal For The Next Hand In Our Nation...






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Re: God Please (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 16th June 2009 @ 10:29:49 AM AEST
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Capitalizing every word does not make for easy reading nor is it enjoyable.


Re: God Please (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Tuesday, 16th June 2009 @ 12:53:27 PM AEST
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i have to agree if you had capitalized the words you wanted real impact on would have been maybe a better approach..

at first i liked what you were sayin but then it felt like it turned into a rant rather than say an ordered expression of feelings.. i do tend to sympathize with these feelings towards the way our generation is but i guess im just not as politically out spoken..

thank you for sharing your feelings.


Re: God Please (User Rating: 1 )
by shanat on Tuesday, 16th June 2009 @ 02:22:12 PM AEST
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Good read, welcome to YPDC:)
shanat.




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